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WIP Crossroads

Discussion in 'Review Board' started by Lindsey, Sep 6, 2024.

  1. Drachna

    Drachna High Inquisitor

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    I have given this fic a second chance, and I have to say that it grew on me a lot. I'd rate it very highly. The tongue and cheek nature of the writing and the very on the nose references to certain fanon tropes can take you out of it, but they're also genuinely funny for the most part. Tracey's POV chapters are a tonal shift, but they're still interesting for that.

    I'd probably give it a 4.5/5. I love the combat and the dialogue for the most part.