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Oneshot Daddy's Girl by EntreNous - NC17

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Alexx, Oct 30, 2013.

  1. Alexx

    Alexx Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    I don't see the problem if she is 14. Besides Harry is banging Narcissa, Bellatrix, Tonks, Lily, Fleur at that age anyway.
     
  2. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Western mindset? Actually, incest isn't really "right" (however you want to define that term) from a biological perspective, given the Westermarck effect. The evidential support for it is not very strong, but it is there, and it neatly explains why incest is rare. The reasons people like reading about incest are various, including the standard attraction to taboo topics, but it is worth keeping in mind that you're reading about somebody else's incestuous relationship. You project yourself onto the main character, who is having a relationship with the main character's mother (in this case, Lily Potter). Lily Potter is not your mother. If the story described Harry having a relationship with a character who was actually your mother, I suspect very few of you would enjoy it nearly as much (if at all).
     
  3. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Hey fucks.

    Hint: Do it. Thread derail ended 23 posts ago.
     
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  4. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Familiar Conversations by Shezza88
     
  5. Styx0444

    Styx0444 Minister of Magic

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    I don't get the bitching. Nothing is impossible to write well, pedo!potter included. The problem isn't the theme of way-to--close father/daughter relations, it's that the writing sucks. It's not terribad, the author has a handle of decent spelling and grammar, but the characterizations, plot, everything that makes it a story, is either missing or shit. Every name could be changed, and if it weren't for the three mentions of magic you couldn't tell it was a HP fic. That's not odd for smut, but the smuty bit is sub par at best. 2/5
     
  6. Caledfwlch

    Caledfwlch Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    Are you serious? I hope not.

    That's like saying Vladimir Nabokov should have been jailed for the content of Lolita.

    (I rated this story 2/5 because, despite the fact it's written well, it isn't very entertaining and I don't think the characterization is at all realistic, with the exception of Ginny.)
     
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  7. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Next try.

    We are going to review this story, the same way as every other story. The next retarded derail gets a tempban. If you can't take a hint, I have no problem being more direct.
     
  8. Vengeful Astartes

    Vengeful Astartes Squib

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    I don't mind Taboo Fic's, however this was way to creepy for my taste.
     
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  9. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Thank God this ended in the Trash Bin.
     
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