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Complete Dagger and Rose by Perspicacity - M (Harry/Fleur - Complete)

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Vates, Feb 24, 2009.

  1. Sauce Bauss

    Sauce Bauss Second Year ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I don't think he said after finishing the whole story. He wants to be over halfway, or a certain word count before starting to post. It helps him stay ahead, and puts less pressure on the author. Either way, Pers has confirmed that he is working on the sequel, so no worries about the story not continuing.
     
  2. squiz

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    Hopefully he will soon start to post the sequel it'll be nice to see which direction it goes.
     
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    After reading half a page I realized I gotta go back and re-read Dagger and Rose...

    Oh well, all I needed was an excuse anyway!:awesome
     
  5. The Fine Balance

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    Read till the point Mr. Lovegood was comforting Harry at his daughters funeral.

    While a lot of the scenes so far fell flat emotionally, they were competently written and pretty fast paced, and I thought one could excuse that drawback in favor of the plot. That funeral scene, however, pretty much killed it for me. Furthermore, him rescuing Hermione instead of Luna was pretty obviously contrived.

    3/5. Readable, but with enough drawbacks that I'm not going to finish it since it doesn't really contain anything that particularly appeals to me.
     
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