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Abandoned Darkness Reigns Supreme by Dark Syaoran - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Dark Syaoran, Dec 27, 2005.

4.25/5, 8 votes
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  1. darkinferno9908

    darkinferno9908 Second Year

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    Dec 29, 2005 #21
    Wholy F-in crap. That was just plain sweet! One of the best HP stories I've ever read. Keep it up!
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Dec 29, 2005 #22
    I'm not giving up on the other story. That's still going but when I get writers block or want a change then I write this one. This story really has no limits like the other one has so it's a lot more fun.

    I've come up with a very good way to get through the Hogwarts wards too. It's so easy that its not funny. Only a muggleborn or muggle raised wizard/witch would ever think of it though. This is with the wards more powerful then they are in canon too. Mwuahaha! Wont it be great when Psycho Killer Harry Potter just strolls into the Great Hall during the opening feast? Mwuahahaha!.... I've yet to come up with a way to get him out of the castle though, lol.... actually, I just thought of something!!! w00t!
     
  3. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    Dec 29, 2005 #23
    sweet, all we need is a dead Ginny, and we're good!
     
  4. Spacks

    Spacks Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Dec 29, 2005 #24
    mmm gore.

    I like this and I look forward to future updates :)
     
  5. Spacks

    Spacks Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Dec 29, 2005 #25
    Put her in cage and then have Harry just bang her occasionaly.

    Oh and capture Bella's husband and put him in the cell next to Bella's and have him watch as Potter bang his wife.
     
  6. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    Dec 29, 2005 #26
    Ya, that would be cool to see.
     
  7. DGD

    DGD Headmaster

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    Dec 29, 2005 #27
    I'd like to see this evolve into a decent Hellatrix(no cage). Haven't seen one of 'em for awhile, and I know you could do it justice if you tried.
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Dec 29, 2005 #28
    I'll try but I got a feeling she is going to get her soul sucked out her mouth. It just looks like its heading that way with whats going to happen to Harry.

    BUT!

    I'll try to somehow.
     
  9. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    Dec 29, 2005 #29
    Dude lock all the weasels in the borrow and blow it up with c4 or the wizard equal
     
  10. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Dec 29, 2005 #30
    Great start. Can't wait for more.
     
  11. Spacks

    Spacks Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Dec 29, 2005 #31
    Yeah, kill Ron.

    I hate that lil pissant.
     
  12. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Dec 29, 2005 #32
    i got an idea as to how you can give her the kiss and keep her

    <idea>
    1)you know the AK rips the soul from the body
    2)the dementors kiss pulls out the soul
    3)by shooting an AK at the dementors negate the affect by pushing the soul back into the body
    4)this allows you to give her some dementor like traits or whatever
    5)now harry can use her to do whatever.
    _=========
    someone better use this...I would but I know I cant pull it off.
     
  13. radioactive

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    Dec 30, 2005 #33
    Well, he is a character anyone can easily dislike. But... kill him? As Albus Dumbledore said: there are things far worse than death. :wink: Strip him of every last knut, take his girl and have him watch her ravished by somebody (Malfoy, Harry, Krum - anyone, really) and snap his wand. Wait until the prick turns dark, curse him to within an inch of his life, then toss him in Azkaban in the high-security wing. Supply him with Elexir Of Life(tm) so he can suffer longer. :twisted: the twit desrves nothing less...
     
  14. MysterioX

    MysterioX Professor

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    Dec 30, 2005 #34
    Wow just wow. But c’mon leave leave Bella alive and well this will be great as a Hellatrix, she could be his Dark Lady just leave it at H/B it will be great.
    update soon
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    The first chapter has been fully completed and posted at FF.Net as well as DLP in the Work by Author section. It hasnt been beta'd yet. I'll get around to getting someone to do that later.
     
  16. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 2, 2006 #36
    Good work! I liked it...though I cringed when you ripped out Sevvy's teeth, thats like watching the paper cut section of Jackass the Movie.
     
  17. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 2, 2006 #37
    whoaaaa. Nice man!

    If you want, I could beta for you too.

    Vash is taking dreadfully long :)
    No offence meant to any or both parties, folks.

    Ahh, and yes, make ron suffer. Perhaps with a potion to simulate werewolf emotions, then lock him in a cell with his girlfriend. He's sane, but his body's not. He sees himself raping/mauling/killing his gf, and he can't control his body.

    Then you can make him watch the weasleys die and make him fuck his sister. She'd take him anyhow.

    And FINALLY you can lock him in the cell with the elixir of life or whatever.
     
  18. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    A little bit about whats going to happen is that Harry is going to vanish sometime... for a very, very, very long time. Very long time. The amount of time that makes people forget. They should never forget!

    Anyway, I got a review saying that why would the Order be angry at him... I guess this dude doesnt take torture very badly. Doesnt matter who you do it too, torture is torture. Meh.

    See the spell's Harry used, lol. That's pretty much all the offensive magic Harry knew before HBP. Isnt that sad? Sure, there are all those stupid jinxes but pfft...
     
  19. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 2, 2006 #39
    True. Point. Right you are, Har... errrr...syao.

    Who sent that review?
    I want to know who thinks torture, even on Death Eaters, is excusable.
    Sick, the lot of them :D (sarcasm, sarcasm)

    Of course, the spoon makes it excusable, but...

    All eyes and ears on this fic right now. Update soon!
     
  20. Treck

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    Poor lil Won Won

    NOT! :shock:

    How about dousing Umbitch with a love potion and then droping them both into Azkaban? :O_O: :wizard:
     
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