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Abandoned Darkness Reigns Supreme by Dark Syaoran - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Dark Syaoran, Dec 27, 2005.

4.25/5, 8 votes
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  1. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Jan 2, 2006 #41
    you cut out snapes eyes and ripped put his teeth...wow :twisted: will other people join him?'but yea I loved the story :D
     
  2. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    Jan 2, 2006 #42
    Re: Poor lil Won Won

    drop who in azkaban with the weretoad?
     
  3. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Re: Poor lil Won Won

    i think he means Ron...

    good punishment
     
  4. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 2, 2006 #44
    and send fudge's body ground up in a bowl, so umbitch Toadface can have all the chocolate she needs. After all, the fat had to come from somewhere right?

    and Ron just might be a necrophiliac, you never know.
     
  5. Treck

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    Re: Poor lil Won Won

     
  6. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    torture via kitchen utensils. very interesting. although that seems to be a definite trend around here. also, when you say harry wil disapear, do you mean that someone will take him away and hell go through that whole training thing.
     
  7. Thorn

    Thorn Professor

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    Jan 3, 2006 #47
    Absolutly amazing. Can't wait for more.

    God I loved the whole torture scenes. I can't wait till he gets to Bellatrix. Outta be good.
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Fuck, I really hate writing Dumbledore. I can never get it how I want it. First half of chapter two is complete.
     
  9. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    Jan 5, 2006 #49
    can you write this fic as harry/bellatrix.... but do not write bella as "oh harry, i was under mind control or something like that".. bella should remain as insane torturer bitch but with some love and a huge lust JUST FOR Harry...





    she should be in love with harry with time of course... i am really looking forward to second chapter. you really know your stuff at torture scene. Snape scene is hilariosu man.







    keep writing chap
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  10. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 5, 2006 #50
    A twisted, psychotic sort of love'd be neat. Insane Bellatrix who's loyalty is to Harry...thats something you see...never.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Got so many ideas in my head that it isnt funny. I went to sleep last night thinking about what Harry should do to Malfoy Snr, lol.

    Looks like everyone wants some Hellatrix... hrmm... I'll try work something out. She is probably the only one that'd fit with the new and improved Harry Potter anyway. No one else would be able to handle it.
     
  12. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    There is a god.... :twisted:
     
  13. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    There is a little bit of chapter two over in the 'Work by Author' section. Not much but its just something to show were its heading a bit.
     
  14. Thorn

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    Jan 14, 2006 #54
    That wasn't even a quarter of chapter 2? I can't wait man. This is good, no doubt.

    Whats up with the red streaks in his eyes? Just decoration or remnants of Voldemort?

    I look forward as to how AK made him smarter to, I sort of raised my eyebrow at that, but with the calibur of this story, I'm sure you'll explain it fine.
     
  15. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Jan 14, 2006 #55
    BRILLIANT!!!


    I MEAN THIS!!!


    this story is EXCEPTIONAL!!!

    ONe question: SUrely they have More than one guard guarding Bellatrix LEstrange, right? And what about outside the door? There will be more people there too, yes?
     
  16. Aura

    Aura Seventh Year

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    Me Likey!!!

    Nice story man! Love the work with the kitchenwares. :twisted: And Hellatrix would be neat if she was still insane and with a sex-crazed appetite to boot!
     
  17. Thorn

    Thorn Professor

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    Honestly I don't like Hellatrix that much. I think Harry should just keep her around for something to fuck. Then like keep her locked up begging for more wearing the remains of Voldemorts scally ass for a hat.
     
  18. DGD

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    Nice, can't wait for the rest of it.
     
  19. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    You must finish this...this..wonderful chapter.....I can't wait... :twisted:
     
  20. Violent Seas

    Violent Seas Sixth Year

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    lmao. this story is freakin crazy!!! :twisted:
    definitely gonna keep watching for updates for this one....
     
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