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Abandoned Darkness Reigns Supreme by Dark Syaoran - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Dark Syaoran, Dec 27, 2005.

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  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jan 15, 2006 #61
    Pwease, Pwease finish the chapter!
     
  2. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Jan 15, 2006 #62
    :Cries silently:

    WHY DO YOU TEASE ME SO CRUELLY!? :( :( :(



    :D :D :D :wink:
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Jan 15, 2006 #63
    Harry could say the same thing about Bellatrix, heh.

    The crimson-streaks are from Voldemort. It'll be explained. Hopefully, the explaination I give will be good, lol.
     
  4. Lord Osiris

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    Jan 15, 2006 #64
    i like where it seems to be heading, absolutly hilarious when he pissed on the guard! never seen anything like it before and sent me to near tears. But i admit your crule Sya! giving us just this teaser :( im hanging out for the rest and hope to see it soon!
     
  5. ChuckDaTruck

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    Jan 15, 2006 #65
    Great. Just re-read it. Update SOON!!

    Still have questions about Bella escaping so easily, but, eh, they're small questions (why only one guard?)

    FANTASTIC ANYWAY!!!
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Who said she's escaped? :twisted:
     
  7. IndoGhost

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    You are evil,Sir.
     
  8. DGD

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    Jan 15, 2006 #68
    Nice chappy.
     
  9. Xiph0

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    Can we expect a chapter in the near future?
     
  10. Dark Syaoran

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    And the completed version of chapter two has been posted on FF.Net and in the 'Work by Author' section. If there are mistakes, it's probably because it hasn't been beta'd like the first chapter.

    Enjoy.
     
  11. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Jan 24, 2006 #71
    Good chapter. Although, I do hope you plan on updating more often and/or making longer chapters, because only two chapters a month on a fic this good will drive me insane.
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I have two stories remember... it takes awhile. This is just an inbetween thing.
     
  13. Lutris

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    Jan 24, 2006 #73
    i hate you.

    I hate you for making me notice this while in class.

    I hate you for making me snicker out loud in rapt silence.

    Ah, the embarassment.


    Nice chapter.
     
  14. IndoGhost

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    Jan 24, 2006 #74
    I like what you had bella do...I think thats what she would do anyway..psycho bitch*says that in an endearing way*..I also like Dumbledore's reaction in the end.
     
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    Hm, the bella part was cool but it seemed like more filler then anything...
     
  16. ip82

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    Jan 24, 2006 #76
    Liked it a lot. Especially the down to earth writting style and Hary/Bella interaction.

    I'm not sure what to think about Harry turning evil so fast. Seems like a completely different character.

    Anyway, keep going this is turning good (your other story too).
     
  17. Lord Ravenclaw

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    Jan 24, 2006 #77
    Nice chapter, I like the writing style. Its rather realistic, and though his decent into evil was quick, its working well and I certainly look forward to more chapters.
     
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    Jan 24, 2006 #78
    Nice one there, Dark.
     
  19. ShadowedDarkness

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    Jan 25, 2006 #79
    And thus the stage is set, looks good so far. I always wondered at how well adjusted Harry was, and his ability to make friends afters eleven years without in the books. Of course with all he has been through at Hogwarts he was always close to the brink, and Voldemort undoubtdely made it worse.
     
  20. Lord Osiris

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    Jan 25, 2006 #80
    How long are you planing on making him stay in Azkaban Sya? i liked the rest of the chapter especially how you didn't make him go into a tirade when he was asked any final words at the trial...short and sweet! Are well i'll be avidlly awaiting more...
     
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