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Abandoned Darkness Reigns Supreme by Dark Syaoran - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Dark Syaoran, Dec 27, 2005.

  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Ooooo! Goodies. People like it.

    He isnt really evil... yet, though he is a sick asshole. I mean, he wont be all 'Mudblood's must die!' just because they breathe. He only tortures and kills people that have fucked with him. And anyone that gets in the way of him getting the people that have fucked with him.

    Tom Riddle was pretty cruel, even when he was young and he was a loner in a way. He's pretty much made a double of himself or shall I say 'equal' as the mighty prophecy states. That can explain why it happened so quickly... even if its a poor explaination.

    Explainations will come but not for awhile yet. Hopefully they will be... original and good. If not... then I suck. :p

    In Harry Potter time he'll in Azkaban for a while. In chapters... maybe 1. Don't want to dwell on it too long, it will bore the readers.
     
  2. SlytherinDamian

    SlytherinDamian Raptured to Hell

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    I especially agree with that. That scene is usually the single most unbearable part even in well written Azkaban fics. I was happy it was so short and to the point (his response), and that the audience wasn't collectively baring their teeth and spitting on him, yelling that he's worse than Voldemort and Hitler combined.

    Good fic.
     
  3. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    GREAT!! Descent was a little fast, BUT I LIKE IT!!

    UPDATE SOON!! :D :D :D
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    What's with all these stories going missing over at FF.Net... hope it doesnt happen to me. I could see them pulling this easy.
     
  5. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    ... well its still posted here. TBH I didn't bookmark the FF.nuts link, I BKMRK'd the DLP one...'


    FUCK!


    Have we ever considered that feartheturtle is stalking our stories and reporting them?!..................

    Oh man....* rubs his forehead and walks offstage*
     
  6. DGD

    DGD Headmaster

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    Oh my god. . . fear. . . stalking us. . . Ahhhh! He probably teamed up with Verlon666 and together they are reporting us all!
     
  7. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    its still up but for how long...
     
  8. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Eh. I don't think Feather cares that much. I think he may occasionally report stuff, but actively seeking out members? I doubt it.


    On another note, is Harry ever going to harness his "power" I hope he doesn't. It would make your story so much lamer. Make hyim learn stuff.


    P.S. UPDATE!!
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    He will only be able to use his 'wandless' powers when he is furious.

    My other story will be updated before this one. I dont know how long it'll be because I got distracted by a plot bunny for another fandom o_O; That's been put to rest now though.
     
  10. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    :( So... so so cruel. It was good, I can't wait 'till its finished. Didn't really like him ratting on the Malfoys, but its understandable.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    He hates them so why not get them in even more shit?

    I forget to post here after I posted that little teaser. People, there is a small teaser in the 'Work by Author' section. Go read it if you want... its nothing special.
     
  12. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    :cry: *hurts deep inside because of teaser* why must you be so evil? :cry:
     
  13. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Death Eaters make the Auror's lifes hell, He doesn't have to deal with DE's ATM so there a tab down on his priorities. The auror guards make his life consistently unpleasent with taunting, prob. spitting on him, the gruel they serve, ext?
     
  14. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Not all the Aurors are bad as you'll see that he has talked to a few of them. He really only wants to harm the Death Eaters but if an Auror/Order Member/Anyone gets in his way of doing that, then they are going to get the same treatment.

    Like I said before, he isnt going to be totally evil... just... semi-evil. o_O;
     
  15. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Excellent! though i dont know whether to be happy or breakout crying? i want more! how far are you with the rest of it? Anyway how long do you actually plan on making him stay in azkaban? i would of thought Riddle would of came to liberate one of his upper class henchman...well woman?
     
  16. Tinder

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    It's a long time since I've seen a new dark Harry story of this caliber. Loved the Harry/Bella interaction (can't really describe it as romance :p) especially the part in the holding cells.

    I was a bit surprised by her strong reaction to hearing about the deaths of Rodolphus and Rabastan though... she just doesn't seem like she would give a toss about them, let alone faint.
     
  17. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Yes, I was just thinking about her reaction just now. I might change it... not sure yet. HBP shows she does actually care about people though... like Narcissa. Even if this is Pre-HBP it's going to have some things from it like characters and stuff. Bella will always be a psyhco bitch but she does have a... errr, normal side with some people...

    I've actually nearly completed the chapter, I've been working on it quite a lot. I dont know when it will be finished but it shouldnt be too long.
     
  18. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Chapter 3 has been completed and posted in the 'Work by Author' section. It hasnt been beta'd yet, of course, so mistakes are probably in there somewhere.

    Some of it might just look like useless filler but believe me, there are hidden things in there.

    It will be posted on FF.Net in a few minutes time...
     
  19. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Very good. I like how you had the Aurors treating him somewhat like a human being rather than some monster. I mean, he is still Harry Potter, and I can imagine them having at least some sympathy for his situation. They aren't coddling him, but neither are they spitting on him and beating him at every turn just because they can. I would have like to have seen him let Greyback and Lucius out too though. My two favorite Death Eaters, after all.
     
  20. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    I like this chapter...I agree with Serapheth about letting grayback out but lucius pisses me off. What are you going to do with Narcissa, David, luna, and Byron?
     
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