Yeah, good chapter on Lust of a dark soul, but seriously, luna lovegood? Harry potter, defeater of lord voldemort, powerful dark lord, feared by all, lost a duel to luna lovegood? I'm sorry but that's just pathetic.

 

Nope.. moved to mature thread... and the reason for such has been posted in said thread

 

Shouldn't this one also be moved to Mature?

It IS pretty graphic...

 

ME LIKEY!

I was reading the ritual part and had a nagging feeling i read something like that before. It wasn't until you said that you based it off Vash's that i recognized it. Great work with the chappy!

Liked his Animagus form. the form isn't cliche with the whole magical-animal/hunter/extinct thingy. I read a bit of the animorphs when i was younger so i didn't really underestimate the fly's abilities. 'S good for getting out of tight situations and for espionage. Original form, at least... It's a bit annoying to read his form is a phoenix/black phoenix/whatnot so this comes as a bit of a relief. Not to mention if you did use a phoenix, you'd get flamed to hell and back by some reviewers here. :twisted:

Voldemort's POV was interesting as well, especially the last part where he mentioned an attack or something... Also Dumbledore's revelation came as a bit of a surprise.

FASTER!!! WRITE FASTER!!! :|

 

Found a little typo. Fenrir Greyback. not grayback... nothing much, just thought you oughta know.

Evil teaser! I wish Harry would just go back and do what he has to do..

 

In the post before the teaser, when you mentioned someone named 'Misha' did you mean Rebecca's uncle Alexei?

If you did, then i just wanted to point out that Misha is a Russian nickname for Michael.

For Alexei/Alixandr, the nickname is Sasha...yeah, i know Russians are wierd.

Well, there's my two cents worth, for all the good that living in fuckin' Moscow for six years did me. Awful cold, that place, and me ma called me here in college a couple of weeks ago telling me that the temperature was -43 degrees Celcius...dunno what that is in Fahrenheit.

 

I read your story and must say, i'll read the next chapters too^^

IMO its a really good story and i hope to read the next chapter soon.

 

That's a good chapter, but it IS mostly a filler - something to move along a plot until Harry's return.

I still liked everything about it - especially Harry setting two dark lords up to attack each other. Cool way to help out the "light" side, without lifting a finger.

Oh, and Ron loosing an arm was a nice touch too - kicking around Ron is always great fun

 

Niiiiiiiiice 8)

Loved the treatment the little redheaded whore recieved from the hands of Macnair, That could easily expand into an other one-shot for the Ginny Kill-Off thread. Actually, it did give me a rather nice idea, but it's after midnight here, so I'll write it tomorrow.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story, and like the fact that you're using a realistic amount of time for Harry to develop his skills before declairing Tom Riddle season to be open.

 

Dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't wanna jump the older topic si I will say it here.
What's up with your story? Everebody desperatly want an update.
So please work on it if you have time.

 

I am. I've been trying to get back on track for the past week. It's hard to get back into story when you stop writing completely for over a month.

Thankfully, I'm done with the scene that has been bugging me for some time and I'm right now at 14,000 words. I still have to write another scene, so the final count should be at least 17K (again). Dunno when I'll manage that, but if I get stuck again, I'll just rush through it since this scene isn't as important as that other one. So, the update will probably be in a week or two...

 

Maybe make the chapters shorter, IP82. It would make it easier for you to get the chapters out. Right now, I have to re-read the whole story.

Eh. I don't know.


This chapter was good Syaoran. I don't know why you're disappointed. UPDATE SOON!! (seriously. I read this and it blows your other two fics out of the water. The writing style and plot are just...fantastic. Update soon)

 

Damn you for the cliffy...


Otherwise great chapter, I love the double backstabbery of Rebecca's Uncle.

 

I'm you Gio...Damn that cliffy...But great chapter... But what are you gonna do with rebecca?