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Dear Order, by SilverWolf7007 - K+

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Janus, Sep 17, 2008.

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  1. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    Dear Order
    Author: SilverWolf7007
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor
    Pairing: None per se
    Status: WIP 10/21 chapters complete
    Summary: I’m still alive, as you may surmise from this note. Of course, I could be dead and someone is faking the letter to fool you… Harry is NOT happy about being left at Privet Drive all summer with no one to talk to.
    Pairings: None really.

    This is just damn amusing.
     
    Last edited: Sep 17, 2008
  2. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    I've read through this... it's funny sometimes but it isn't that well written. 3/5
     
  3. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    Somehow I doubt well written was the point. =P Its more a collection of one-shots than an epic.
     
  4. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    It's good for a few chuckles and nothing more. Bin material at most.
     
  5. azrael

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    This was amusing, but the RL/SS pairing is rather unnecessary, and the joke gets old after awhile. 3/5
     
  6. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    I read this some time ago and while amusing in places, not library worthy material. 3/5
     
  7. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    I'm certain that this has been posted before.

    It sucks, by the way.
     
  8. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Yes, it has been through here before, it never made it into the library. Wasn't good the first time around.
     
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    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I... enjoyed it, just as a way to pass the time. I'd call it bin worthy. Definitely not library, not really bad enough to delete it. 3/5
     
  10. Militis

    Militis Supreme Mugwump

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    I really liked this story, even if it isn't really a story. It probably isn't Library worthy (compared to all the other excellent stories there), but it isn't bad at all. Very lulzy if you're having a bad day. 4/5
     
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    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    First few chapters were mildly lulz, but the buttsecks ruined it. Thanks, but no thanks.
     
  12. Padfoot85

    Padfoot85 Sixth Year

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    Just read it and found it very lacking. I dunno if the author was trying to just waste time and was as bored as her Harry in the fic was, or what.

    The only decent part was the idea that started the whole thing.

    Snape telling Dumbledore how much he sucked. I lolled for about 3 seconds at the originality of it and then moved on. It does seem that the rest of the story was just added on filler. Either way it's obvious the author isn't seriously trying.


    1/5 for decent spelling and grammar and that's it.

    Bin it.
     
  13. scaryisntit

    scaryisntit Death Eater

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    Some of the letters were amusing and made me smile. However, as stated already, the writing is pretty unsatisfactory and the RL/SS is completely unnecessary.

    2/5
     
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