Title: Defiant Author: genhoss Rating: M Genre: Drama/Adventure DLP Category: alternates, SG1 crossover Pairing: Female Harry/Luna Lovegood Status: WiP Summary: A harry potter sg1 crossover. harry gets changed into a girl, femslash, HPLL crosses over book5 season 7 Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3350474/1/Defiant I almost didn't even read this story because the author absolutely demolished the grammar unique to the Harry Potter books and even some regular words. If you decide this story isn't worth reading before reading at least the second chapter DON'T. The grammar and such improves drastically in the second chapter I realize that there some cliches in the story such as the overly evil/traitorous Snape, the 'helpful goblins' and such but there is actual back story to it that I'm not going to say here as to spoil it for those who do read it. I also like the pairing as well as Luna's more serious side in the story and just generally the whole plot as Harry isn't some all powerful ancient descendant or some such crap. I would probably give this story between a 3.5 to a 4. If the first chapter were to be redone that would definitely be a 4. What else holds it back is the overly done cliches i mentioned earlier, otherwise i think that this is a good and quite realistic story. Especially the 'hairy legs' moment as well as the in character dialogue for the SG1 characters with things like Jack's witty comments.