Maltese Falcon~ Thanks, I had fun writing the dragons. I was worried they might be seen as cliché because they’re omg! Dragons! But everyone likes them so I’m happy. FF.net alerts are still dead though.

The Dark Monarch~ Hey, glad you liked Staffcharmer, she will visit often. Good to know you liked crazy Harry, he’s fun to write that way.

Surrarin~ Ninjas are on the way, I’ve ordered the suits but the bastards at customs are holding up the cat claws.

Tripticwriter~ Don’t worry about crazy Harry, there are mixed feelings about him but its part of his characterization for now and he will develop through it in time. So you like his secret power being a pornstar’s love?

Aekiel~ Reason he was seeing Lilly was because he is well seeing things right now. He just survived a psychic attack and he has been in solitary confinement for a long time. Its messed with him a bit. The jerkiness of the narration is because of Harry’s mental-ness right now, so that was intended. Glad you liked the chapter.

Emt10~ Hey thanks for the correction, I took care of that in the next chapter. Glad you’re enjoying it.

Jeram~ Always good to hear there’s nothing bad to say Thanks.

Odinmage~ Refer up to response to Surrarin for ETA on Ninjas. Harry, like you said, has been through a lot so the effects of that will be apparent but he will level out as time goes by. In the mean time its just fun to write him that way.

Oujou~ I felt I laid the groundwork for his craziness with the sequence in prison. He will be a little nutty for a while as he works through it. Glad you liked the chapter.

The Dark Lord Squash~ Finally, another one who likes crazy Harry. Glad to hear that, more of that to come but sadly there is a limit on it, he has to get better with time. Thanks.

DoWnEr~ I like the dragonets a lot, happy to hear you enjoyed them too. I wonder why I can write a crazy wizard well Thanks for the review.

 

Surrarin~ Thanks, mate.

Swim~ Poor Dresden, one person whose bad luck matches Potter’s. Thanks.

Quazi~ I was dead tired when I wrote that bit, good to know it is actually funny. Yeah, you’re beginning to see the actual ‘plot’ of the story now, and there are many facets of it. Things that seem unexplained right now will come together later. Morgan’s attitude is probably not going to change unless something drastic happens. The Gatekeeper is an awesome character, and I hadn’t thought of it but there are similarities between him and Dumbledore- scary.

Stalicon~ Thanks for pointing that out, I took care of it. Unfortunately, I’ve already posted on FF.net.

Maltese Falcon~ lol, always a pleasure ‘making your day.’ I’m beginning to like Guzzman, enjoyed how he didn’t give Dresden a lengthy explanation just called him an idiot. Jon helped a lot with the scene of Harrys trying to sway Murphy away from the other. The puppies line is all his, I stole it from him, so props are his on that. The goblins one is mine and the hell prince

DoWnEr~ There might, possibly be some ravaging I wrote the last part when I was dead on my feet so its good to know it came out well. More of both Harrys in the next chapter. Thanks.

Aekiel~ You are very welcome, sorry I couldn’t get out before you went to sleep. Felt I let you down. If it was a bit rushed it was because of you you have only yourself to blame. The Black Cats bit, and as you can see Harry questions that whole thing as well will be cleared up later in the story. As in why exactly did it just come out of nowhere. The Sight, you’re right about that. I’d moved on from those parts to give myself time to think of what Kirmani’s soul would look like including the other elements and didn’t come back to it. There will be other times he uses it and I will remedy that. It is an important ability and I need to describe it better. Thanks for the review.

 

Damn it, now you've gone and made me feel guilty. Not fair! You had an extra 9 hours after I went to sleep to finish the chapter properly...

Anyways, work on the next chapter and make it Longer! And Better! And Stranger! ...Ok maybe not stranger, but the Harry & Harry interaction should be amusing.

Aekiel

 

Lol. ironically i started to watch Dresden Files because of this fic.

 

Well I said it before in the Aurthor thread when you posted the chapter but this is very good. I understand that you are using the TV show as a backdrop which is cool cause I thought it was quite good. Spelling errors are few, the plot is good and keep me waiting for a update, your battles are so far quite good and unique, and you write a wonderful semi crazy Harry. Keep up the good work

5/5

 

That was awesome. Just pure fucking awesome.

Definitely worth the wait.

Edit: Oi, I didn't see the review note. Meh, sorry. -.-

 

Very funny. The comedy is so good it's mind boggling.

 

5/5

It took me every ounce of my will to not loose control. I like the ending. Funny scenes and you show few but hilarious ironic scenes. Anyway keep it up.

 

You missing a verb there.

Cool chapter anyway. I'm not Tinn, so I'll just say this:

 

Good chapter, though a little confusing one why she raped him. That's kinda illegal in most countries.

Aekiel

 

T_T...no comment.

 

ROFL NUHUH! hahahahahaha. +Rep for you!

Great chapter and yeah I noticed it. I spent the whole chapter looking for it... when I found it I burst out laughing Great chapter Nuhuh -- guessing it was written for all of the sexually starved people out there? (Including you)

Your characterisation is wonderful and I love the way you add humour into everything. It lightens your fic ^_^ I enjoyed reading the beginning and I think I spotted one typing error :| I wasn't actively searching out errors like I was in Jon's fic. lol.

One epic chapter and I seriously cannot wait for the next update.
Good job Nu'Huh.

 

Hmm, a very good effort. Only a couple of mistakes that jumped out as I was reading - and a reasonably good look at some Harry/Harry repetitive name silliness (which I was waiting for). The whole domination scene was - good, I guess, if a bit "much" for my own not quite S&P-level prurient tastes.

The insanity of Harry Potter is okay - although at times his constant hallucinations got a bit distracting. I did like how others seemed to interact with his "not-quite-there" actions.

But I really liked the ending.

Good job,
-J

 

Quite a good story, though a few grammatical errors were getting to me. I'm picky like that, so just ignore me. Your use of comma's is strange, not placing them in the right parts or at all, but besides that the fic is excellent. I love the schizophrenic Harry, though his reluctance towards telling Dresden he's not an Outsider seems to be just a filler to me. The plot line seems to be in a bit of a traffic jam, but I guess this stuff needs to be in the story. Keep up the good work.

Kolskit

 

Looks like I haven't reviewed this yet. I think it is great. I love Harry's (Potter) character. Crazy and powerful. The only thing I didn't like was how much more of a spotlight Harry (Dresden) gets than Harry (Potter). Although, that does make it easier to superpower Harry (Potter) and still have struggle in the plot. Still, Potter FTW.

4.8/5

 

Excellent chapter and the finish was brilliant.
Update soon.

 

I don't want to lock this thread in case nuhuh is going to have something to add but I will quote the author's post for the visually challenged: