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Detention....or a reason to join the Dark Lord by Barkeeper - M - OneShot

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Barkeeper, Jan 26, 2007.

  1. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Interesting.... but lack of humor kinda defeats the idea of it being in the HUMOR Section. 1/5
     
  2. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    It was mildly amusing... somewhat. The bits in the middle anyway. But truthfully the whole story was pretty pathetic. I guessed the ending half way through. It would have been more amusing had Harry gone for vengeance as Justblaise said.

    This was here before the review system was put in place I take it. I think this should be removed from the Library give the reviews its got so far.

    2/5
     
  3. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Sorta got a kick out of Lavender but not even enough to make me break out in a demented smile. Fail! 2/5
     
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