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Dumbledore's Payback by Laume - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by cu_cullen9, May 30, 2006.

3.1428570747375/5, 7 votes
  1. cu_cullen9

    cu_cullen9 Second Year

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    May 30, 2006 #1
    Title: Dumbledore's Payback
    Author: Laume
    Rating: T
    Genre: General/Humor
    Pairing: NONE
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: OOC, AU, Etc. Voldemort is gone, and Harry is free. Now it's time for some payback...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2793402/3/
     
  2. MysterioX

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    May 30, 2006 #2
    Didn't like it after
     
  3. Nexus

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    Jun 2, 2006 #3
    what are you talking about it was kinda funny......
     
  4. coupdmain

    coupdmain First Year

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    Jun 2, 2006 #4
    checks... yes this is in the Paradoy section, not the dark arts section... loosen up man...
     
  5. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Aug 4, 2009 #5
    Another abandoned fic. It's only four chapters, and is a relatively quick read.

    The premise is that Harry makes Dumbledore own up to how much he manipulated his life by showing him pensieve memories. Dumbledore is horrified, and the effects are supposed to be funny. He retires from Hogwarts, puts himself and Snape in therapy, punishes the Dursleys, Umbridge, and Fudge, etc.

    It's got some mildly lulzy moments (the Fudge/Umbridge fate, Snape's attempts to write Harry a letter of apology) but the fic is just too silly to really interest me. It's a little too 'cute,' but maybe others will find it more amusing.

    3/5
     
  6. Perspicacity

    Perspicacity Destroyer of Worlds ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Aug 4, 2009 #6
    Not bad, but not epic either. Seems like good Recycling Bin material.

    3/5
     
  7. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 4, 2009 #7
    This story doesn't really belong in the Library. It belongs more in the Recycle Bin, but I will say that this fic had it's moments. 3/5
     
  8. zekses

    zekses First Year

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    Jul 1, 2018 #8
    It is actually quite different to most bashing fics and is really funny more than once. 4/5 from me.
    Not a masterpiece but as far as cracks go, this is among better ones
     
    Last edited: Jul 1, 2018
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