In my defense, I just didn't take time to properly describe what Harry was going through and so it was particularly boring to read through. Once I read the constructive criticism you gave me I was able to subjectively read it, notice the lack of attention shown to the Parthenon, and moving forward, I was also able to focus on more description... which is part of the reason the next two chapters improved.

It was merely an oversight on my part. The conversation with Delphi was the bulk of the chapter, and I sleep-walked through the beginning stages. You were totally right to lay into me, and I am appreciative that you did. I've taken the things you just recently said into consideration as well.

(Anyway, I wasn't intending to make this thread all about me and my story, I was just giving some insight into how I write. I suppose if I was writing a novel-length original work of my own, I would probably approach the outlining process differently, because I wouldn't have an opportunity to go back after it was published.)

Carry on.