bravo on another excellent story done! I think this is a great spot to end it, an HP story 30 years into the future with most of the main cast dead doesn't seem very appealing to me. You'd need a wicked idea and some great OC character building to pull it off. Frankly I think you'd be better off writing an original piece.

Thanks for the great story, and I'm looking forward to more Ouroboros and especially more Sitra Ahra.

 

Great stuff, Voice. The thought of Umbridge ruling over the country for thirty years or so is almost as creepy as your portrayal of Azkaban, but while I'd love to see more of that universe, I'd agree with Giller. You might as well start an original story at that stage.

5/5 - excellent writing, outstanding sense of place within Azkaban, thrilling action...pretty much everything you could ask for.