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Complete Equal and Opposite by Amerision - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Amerision, Jun 5, 2006.

  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Title: Equal and Opposite
    Author: Amerision
    Rating: M
    Genre: Horror/Drama
    Chapters: 11
    Words: 47,974
    Updated: May 3, 2009
    Published: June 4, 2006
    Status: Complete


    Summary: Left bitter and angry when his female self leaves him, Harry
    decides he will do anything for revenge. Nobody will stand in his way.
    Because desperation and anger and can turn even the most noblest of
    hearts into darkness... Dark!Harry HarryFem!Harry

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2973799/1/


    Seeing how the preview in Across the Mirror was approved, I rewrote the story. The original oneshot has been altered and made the prologue, the preview was changed some, with the backstory taken out so I can span it over the story instead, and the new chapter is original.

    Enjoy.


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 25, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Nov 25, 2012
  2. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Good you got it right. It's a good new chapter, glad I can help with a great story. :)
     
  3. Shuujaku

    Shuujaku Fourth Year

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    Nice. The edit made things a lot better and the new chapter was good, too.
     
  4. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Very Nice Am. Vash approves!
     
  5. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    Great job. I like how Harry's going all mad cause of a girl not meeting up with him.
     
  6. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    good chapter ....the new one....
     
  7. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One

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    Good! I can only hope that we get to see the consequences of Harry's obliviations of Ron and Hermione soon. Excellent chapter.
     
  8. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    good. new chapter is nice. the background information about the mirrors is explanotry. will harry seek the other mirrors??
     
  9. Patrik f

    Patrik f Guest

    Great story, I love how he seams to constantly memory charm Ron and Hermione as well as black mail Draco...
     
  10. Iznic

    Iznic Guest

    Nice start, looking forward to seeing how the blackmail draco will turn out
     
  11. poster

    poster Guest

    great start, I like how harry is starting to act like tom does
     
  12. zenaku

    zenaku First Year

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    Hmm... A thought. What if, Harry going dark and all, was the mirror reflection's intent? I mean, I've only read the prologue up until the release of this story, so I don't know if there was anything previously explained about the reflection. But, if she's his opposite, it would make sense for her to be dark. And thus, she would probably want to turn him also. And, her being him, she would know just how to do so. That makes sense, at least to me. :headshot:

    Edit: It's amazing how much information one finds, when one reads a story a second time. Didn't notice the bit of backstory for Jamie, the mirror reflection, in there.
     
    Last edited: Jun 6, 2006
  13. razz

    razz Seventh Year

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    Excellent ;)

    Very, very recommended.

    The new chapter is awesome.
     
  14. Promios

    Promios Fourth Year

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    Wonderful!
     
  15. Excellent story
     
  16. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    Looking good, liked the one-shot and really glad you are making it into a story, keep up with the good work.
     
  17. CGB

    CGB Auror

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    Really good story. Does your Harry has a goal? Like world domination? Or does he just seek knowledge for his revenge on Jamie?
     
  18. Verse of Darkness

    Verse of Darkness Denarii Host

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    I. Love. This. Story!
     
  19. Duke of Rothwood

    Duke of Rothwood Professor

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    Yeah this is really good, hope you keep it up
     
  20. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Amerision, I love your story. My previously mentioned offer of letting you bear my MPREG! Children still stands...

    I love what you have him do to Malfoy, and I am looking forward to seeing what you have him do to poor Tracy Davis.

    I am looking forward to the next update -- whenever it happens to happen.

    But just out of curiosity, when will you (if you decide to) be bringing back his equal and opposite?

    -Giovanni
     
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