It won't be for a couple or more chapters...Harry has some work to do in his world first .

I'm working on the next update, almost finished...I just have to write the actual part with Tracey.

Thanks!

Amerision

 

I was under the impression that you were going to make the two opposites in the worlds. I mean in her's they were some sort of Dark Magi and in his they are the epitami of light.

 

it already on my story alert, i would to know what the real reason dumbles is keeping harry out of the loop on the war i mean harry's the only one who can kill voldy yet he is frozen out hope you update soon

 

I'm not sure what you're asking, but Harry and Jamie are not continuously
inversed - meaning that as Harry gets darker, Jamie won't get lighter.

Also, the mirror show your equal and opposite, not the entire world. The weasleys are not rich bastards, etc.

Any changes in the mirrorworld stem from Jamie's character, and how she would have changed Harry's world had she been in his place.

 

Chapter 3 is up.

It's longer than the other chapters, (minus the prologue) and is more plot oriented than the others.

For the smut fans...sorry.

Nothing explicit.

And now, after staying up to 2:00 AM writing, I'm going to sleep.

Have fun.

Amerision

 

Simply, fucking amazing. Loved it! Words cant describe. I bow to you.

I love seeing all the ideas you said being put in work.

 

Huh! Update was brilliant.

I loved the bit with Ginny - I do hope that's expanded.

 

Meh. I always prefer skillful seduction to the love potion route, I'd rather you have Harry work for it then simply having a magical potion to solve all his problems. Still, decent chapter.

 

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This chapter was great, especially considering you were working against a deadline.

I don't know but in terms of the tactical element of how Harry carries about his operation, I think you have Vashy beat. The way Harry tricked Sludgehorn into giving him access to the potions room was extremely well thought out. The way Harry picked up and then used both the antidote and also the love potion ingrediant took a nice degree of brilliance. As an author myself, I noticed how crazy it is to avoid plotholes AND looseends. So I took especial delight at seeing how that little scene worked out.

The flow of the chapter was really second to none. I can see you spent time thinking about the two love potion scenes. That's going to get you HUGE suppot from DLP members for sure. Clever use of the chest beast. What a crack up.

As for Amortentia, the logical part of my mind was wondering how easy it was for Harry to get it and then apply it, but then realized he had to get that ingrediant from Sludgehorn's office. Very good, if that was what you were going.

Clearly your strategy of going through your chapter during each writeup pays excellent dividends. It's a very well polished piece of work. Wish I could do it, but then my story is 100k+ already and I actually can't stand parts of what I write.

Keep up the good work... for when you get back. Have fun and keep safe on your upcoming trip.

Added: I have some potentially critical comments, but I'll save them for when you get back. And I'll need another chapter at least before I can actually pen them.

 

While I agree with Illusive that I prefer skillful seduction to the love potion so was it still a great chapter, please say that Harry will fuck Ginny and make her
do a lot of sick and twisted things before he tells her that the love potion dident work. Hopefully he will also take pictures of her to blackmail her to keep her away from him.

 

i wonder when you will write about jamie again? i wonder what she will do when she sees harry fucking all the girls in hogwarts. does she use the boys in her world like harry uses the girls??

 

Just finished reading the latest chapter. Looks good. Of course Ginny would have tried to drug Harry. It's the only way she could get his attention.

 

Great new chapter. I especially liked the Ginny part. As Patrik f I hope he uses her thoroughly before he dumps her.

 

I really hate to be the one to piss in the party's champagne, but... I can't quite see this as Harry/fem!Harry. It's looking more and more like Harry is a sadistic, evil bastard, who will eventually start raping babies, or something.

And even though I can't change what you're going to do, I just have to say, if it turns out that Harry just ends up torturing Jamie until she begs for death, and then kills her, then I'm going to have to drop this fic, no matter how well it's written. I just can't see torture as a healthy basis for a relationship, as you have advertised it to eventually(?) become.

Torturing anyone else, on the other hand... :cheers:

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwww Trident is that you

 

...You insult my intelligence, good sir! *Puts on gloves, takes them off, and slaps moody in the face with them*

I challenge ye to a duel! Pistols, fifty paces at dawn!

Just because I have a dissenting opinion doesn't mean I'm automatically a fucktard.

 

*looks annoyed*

Anyways...Harry's actions are vital to his change of character from stupid Gryffindor to darker, semi-evil manipulator.

Jamie won't be expecting this Harry...

 

True but I'm wary of people who joined in june and have low post counts

fire.!!!!!

I win you saucy naive

 

*cough* 'Tis not yet dawn... I win by... forfeit... *Gasp* *Sputter* *Die*

Let's quit this before we piss off the sheepy overlord more.