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Eternal Return by Sliver Pard- k+

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by ray243, Mar 29, 2009.

  1. ray243

    ray243 Seventh Year

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    Title: Eternal Return
    Author: Sliver Pard
    Rating: K+
    Genre: General
    DLP Category: General?
    Pairing: Unsure
    Status: Completed
    Summary: For the Greater Good. Harry understands this.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4726291/1/Eternal_Return

    I would love to give this story a 4/5, but the fact that it is a little OOC annoys me. However, if Harry isn't a little OOC, then this story would not be written to begin. I have to give story a 3/5, but it is still an interesting read.

    This is basically a morality tale as compared to a character development tale. What happens when you end up in the body of Voldermort, and seeks to ensure that the future will remain the same?

    In regards to the concept of greater good, what is wrong with that view? Just because someone called it a greater good does not necessarily mean the end result really is a greater good.

    I like the ending though, one of the most depressing endings, not because everyone died, but because of something else. Yet at the same time, the ending gives you a haunting and sorrowful feeling.
     
    Last edited: Mar 29, 2009
  2. Silens Cursor

    Silens Cursor The Silencer DLP Supporter

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    I'm sorry, but you have failed. This story is already in the library and thus did not need to be recommended. Advise that you check said list of stories before posting in this thread again.
     
  3. ray243

    ray243 Seventh Year

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    Ah, my bad.
     
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