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Complete Everything About You by njhill22 - M

Discussion in 'Romance' started by Lucullus, Oct 13, 2007.

  1. ParseltonguePhoenix

    ParseltonguePhoenix Unspeakable

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    I'd say it fits humor AND romance. I'm sure I'm not the only one that can look back at a girl I dated and ask myself what the fuck I was thinking choosing her over a quick leap from the roof of the Empire State Building. Although in her defense, she wasn't ugly...just totally fucking insane. And now I can just refer to her as my Pansy when my sanity flees and I take a trip down memory lane.
     
  2. Augurey

    Augurey Backtraced

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    I think we've all had one of those girlfriends. Harry, as usual, got the worst of 'em.
     
  3. Othalan

    Othalan High Inquisitor

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    A bucket full of lulz. I actually really enjoyed this, and can sympathize with Harry's plight. Overall, an amazingly good job.

    5/5
     
  4. Blah-the-Sixth

    Blah-the-Sixth First Year

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    I liked the approach. Most Harry/Pansy stories I've seen make her out to be the transfigured mistake of her parents; who is really quite beautiful. Add in the humor and interaction and I'd give it a solid 4/5
     
  5. kmfrank

    kmfrank Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Haha, just found this today from another site, and was going to post it here in the library.

    Lots of lulz here, especially for anyone who can relate by having one of those relationships where the fights are the only thing worthwhile and your friends try to talk you out of it.

    5/5 for me, as those are most of my relationships!
     
  6. Anya

    Anya Harley Quinn DLP Supporter

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    Read it and loved it. Now one of my favorite stories. Only because I love Pansy and want to marry her, lawl.
    5/5
     
  7. KirijamaScion

    KirijamaScion First Year

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    Love=Death of Sanity.
    Nothing new there. Been that way forever.
    4/5
     
  8. Illution

    Illution Seventh Year

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    lol fills this story. There can never be too much lol. So 5/5
     
  9. Scott

    Scott Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    I read it twice already 4/5 it's hilarious.
     
  10. Karasu-sama

    Karasu-sama Squib

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    3/5

    I liked it a bunch, but the... meme of the story definetely got old after five chapters. I mean it was a well-constructed love-hate scenario and it had a lot of good stuff, but after the third straight chapter of denials and rationalization, I just wanted to grab Harry by the throat and scream at him to just get on with it. It gave him and Pansy a nice rapport to be sure, but it made his POV very tedious.
     
  11. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    4/5 from me. It was definitely different enough. Funny at points, and written decently.
     
  12. Pandie

    Pandie Muggle

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    *now ships p/h*

    Well written and very lulzy, but it did get a bit repetitive in parts. Regardless, I loved it. 4.5/5
     
  13. Ledivin

    Ledivin Squib

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    I didn't expect much, but damn that was good.

    5/5
     
  14. Mog

    Mog DA Member

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    lol. It's like a Soap Opera stuck on the fast forward button, except it's amusing. I just wonder why Harry kept going back. Was he suppose to be a masochist?

    Edit: Sorry about the necro wasn't paying attetion to the last post date.
     
    Last edited: Oct 2, 2009
  15. Gabrinth

    Gabrinth Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    If the thread is in the library, necroing is not against the rules (Unless the post is retarded or troll, but that's always against the rules).
     
  16. Photon

    Photon Order Member

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    It seems that it was supposed funny - for me it completely failed. Terrible formatting was not improving situation.
     
  17. Probellum

    Probellum Death Eater

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    I'm actually thankful for the Necro, a I wouldn't have found this otherwise.

    Made me chuckle and was very enjoyable. 5/5
     
  18. Tomster10010

    Tomster10010 Third Year

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    I actually like this a lot. It's funny and it's cute. Anyone know of any similar romance fics?

    5/5 from me