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Oneshot Evil Be Thou My Good by Ruskbyte - Hellraiser - M

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Treck, Jun 25, 2005.

  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Took me for fucking ever, but quoted for truth.

    There's spelling errors, there's massive glaring grammar errors, but it's so awesome it just doesn't matter.

    Clearest 5/5 in the entire library.
     
  2. Banner

    Banner Dark Lady

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    I've read this one At Least four times, and I'm always riveted. It just gets better. Terrific story.

    5/5
     
  3. Alec_potter

    Alec_potter Squib

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    Great one piece. Specially the visit to Fudge's office...
    5/5
     
  4. JohnThePyro

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    Good fic, there were some mistakes I found myself correcting mentally as I went through, but overall 5/5.
     
  5. Alcibiades

    Alcibiades First Year

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    That was so good! I can't believe I never read it before...It's incredible.
    There was one part though, that made me really laugh: Peter Pettigrew's death, or rather, the event leading to it.

    [/quote]"No... no... not again..." he groaned, clasping his left hand over bleeding stump of his right.[/quote]

    Lolz
    For those wondering, you have to read it to understand it.

    5/5
     
  6. smoss

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    This is a cool story, scary but cool
    or in other word brilliant, but bloody scar
     
  7. Akuma-san

    Akuma-san First Year

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    plot 6/5
    evil harry 5/5
    Pinhead and his gang 5/5
    grammar 4/5
    Umbitch and fudge packer's death 5/5

    Perfect 5/5 this deserves a legendary area.
     
  8. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    You're necro'ing to tell us THIS bullshit? Pour some gasoline over your head, find a nice person with balls, (because you have none) hand them some matches, and tell them to do their civic duty and to scatter the ashes afterwards.
     
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  9. Banner

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    Thanks for reminding me about this one. I spent the evening rereading it. Again.
    Too bad I can't vote it up any higher. Any story that can be read some five times ought to get a bonus.
     
    Last edited: Jun 17, 2008
  10. Bukay

    Bukay Professor DLP Supporter

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    Same here.
    It's a gem and in my opinion the best horror fic in the potterverse... Although it's a pity that I still haven't seen the Hellraiser movies...

    5/5
     
  11. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    I saw one of the Hellraisers. Fucking hell, its insane! Omg, it was so horrorific, it was amazing. You'd enjoy it. But I don't remember which "Hellraiser" it was. I think there's about 4 of them.
     
  12. Bukay

    Bukay Professor DLP Supporter

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    Wikipedia is your friend:) There are 8 parts of the series so far, and another one scheduled for next year.... A lot to catch up...
     
  13. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    I first read this a while ago. Just reread it again and it is still good. 5/5
     
  14. Sorrows

    Sorrows Queen of the Flamingos Moderator

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    This.Is.Epic

    The ending had me in stiches, he should add a few oneshots as Harry uses it on other people...
     
  15. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Well, "Pinhead" didn't think they'd see each other again. So no, I doubt it's going to happen.
     
  16. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Just finished re-reading this again and if anything my rating has gone up. 5/5
     
  17. FollowTheReaper

    FollowTheReaper Professor

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    Can it go up from a perfect 100%?
     
  18. Othalan

    Othalan Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Quite possibly the very definition of "Epic Win". There was so much awesome packed into this, I very nearly shat myself out of pure joy. It is fics like this that remind me that there really is hope for Humanity.

    129/5
     
  19. Hiasha

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    Best evil Harry I've ever read, and the plot was well thought out. Beyond that, the ending was great. 5/5
     
  20. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    Your definition of evil is skewed...
     
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