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I have been thinking of this plot bunny for a while; letting it stew in my head for sometime now and I finally think it's time to get started with the writing. It is mostly Dumbledore-centric and set in the last part of the the Goblet of Fire. Basically Dumbledore deduces who the traitor is and takes action (I don't want to go into any more details here).

I have figured out what I think is a pretty solid outline for the story, but I need help with characterisations, any unforeseen plotholes and proofreading so I'm asking for the aid of someone who is really good at betaing (preferably one who has written good fanfics as well) so we can discuss and toss ideas around. I have a short snippet written (about 1000 words in case anyone's interested about my writing level). So, any takers?

 

Once you've completed a chapter you can pm me a google docs link; I've done a fair bit of writing and have beta'd for Voice of the Nephilim for the last six months or so. I do mostly stylistic editing but that's because Voice has his characterizations/plot pretty well down pat, so I can certainly help you with those if you need them as well.

 

Thanks! I plan on having the story start mainly from slightly after the second task beginning from the death of Crouch Sr. (with a few flashbacks) and I don't plan on it being being long since it's going to fast-paced. I do have a short snippet that I'm itching to have evaluated, but I will churn out the first chapter and let you guys have it at.

 

Cheddar, I sent the PM. T3t, as soon as I'm done with the first chapter I will send you the link.