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FanFiction Cliches - Do not delete

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Lord Ravenclaw, Aug 13, 2005.

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  1. Miss Selarne

    Miss Selarne Sixth Year

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    that makes sense, sort of. its still horrible though. i wouldn't mind it as much if the stories were actually written well (and didn't completely focus on romance. i prefer action and angst.) and i personally don't like slash. i just don't think that it would happen.
     
  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nope, it's just something she totally forgot about after GoF evidentally.

    She needs godamned continuity people to remind her of things.
     
  3. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    New one:

    -The main bookstore in Diagon Alley having these "ultra secret super duper blow the world up in 2 words" spellbooks that somehow no one has found or used yet.

    Honestly.. with all the dark arts purebloods out there, do you think that shit would be laying around like that?

    It's almost as bad as the bastards who write Slytherins magical compartment trunk that has been sitting in the trunk store for 900+ years, somehow not moved, thrown out, nothing. Just sitting there taking up space.
     
  4. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Or the Phoenix that just sits in the shop and waits for Harry.
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I personally hate when he goes to some pet store in Knockturn and buys a Basilisk or Basilisk egg... it's just not going to happen! They are pretty much extinct but they have eggs and shit lying around? Plus, if the shop keeper or anyone else for that matter looked it in the eyes... well, just imagine all the people dropping dead in their shop?

    And Voldemort would have brought one himself if they were just lying around, waiting in some store. Who cares if he's already got Nagini... its a fucking Basilisk!@#~
     
  6. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Another one, Harry goes to Gringotts, meets Griphook and greets him and then every goblin, sometimes every magical creature, worships him.
     
  7. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    why must harry grow from 5'2" to like 6'8" in like two nights?
     
  8. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    What two nights? Normally he only needs one.
    Harry masters martial arts in a a few weeks.
    And then there is Harry having all these magical abilities that no one knew about.
     
  9. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Actually my personal favorite cliche is Diagon/Knockturn Alley's = Weapons Black Market.

    Though it is followed closely by poorly written Harry/Ginny fics that usually go a little something like this.

    "Harry saw Ginny and realized he had always loved her."

    Followed by a smattering of angst, then lust, then love, then marraige. then more mindless fluff, and then they both kill Voldemort and live happily ever after.

    Or here is another one.

    Harry has kids. 'Nuff said. I think I have seen one good one... Out of about 1 million written.
     
  10. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    And there is the custom wand, most of the time created in Knockturn Alley.
     
  11. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Or wait... wait... Lets not forget that he is filthy fucking rich and gryffindor/merlin/ravenclaw/slytherin/hufflepuff/all 5 or some other wierd combination's heir.
     
  12. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Well there is Harry being Grindelwalds grandson, which doesn't really work.
    I think we start repeating ourselves.
     
  13. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I have seen a couple where it worked... Not many... But a couple.

    Absolute WORST cliche is a bad self insertion by a female author.

    Well wait... No thats not nessacarily true... The WORST cliche is the cliche that doesn't know that its a cliche... The explanitory authors notes in the middle of a chapter because the author is not a talented enough writer to actually make their story make sense.

    Other annoying cliches (and yes they are done often enough to be cliches) are passive voice/over-used linking verbs... They annoy me to no end.

    Especially when I see a sentence like this:

    "...and harry went to the store because he knew that he had to buy a porno mag and some fish and some chips, because his knowledge of the english language was not advanced enough to come up with a better sentence to communicate this particular misadventure of harrys."

    In other news... GIOVANNI HATES WEAK WRITING!!!
     
  14. Old Nuit

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    Plot holes
     
  15. Zevrillion

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    Guys, I think we should thank all those untalented authors out there. Without them we wouldn’t be having this discussion.
     
  16. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Agreed.

    Thank you untalented authors... :?
     
  17. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Alright
     
  18. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    yes after thanking them we can burn them
     
  19. Dark Syaoran

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    Everyone was on a roll! That was awesome.

    I'd breed an army of Basilisk's if they were that easy to find and tame. Could take over the world in a few months buy feeding them aging potion because I can!

    Yes Gio, I hate that type of writing too because its stupid and it should not be posted if its writen like that but it happens and we have to put up with those shit stories because fanfiction.net bans too many good stories and not enough bad ones and that makes me mad but the fucking cry babies reads that report the stories always get their way...

    That custom wand stuff isnt bad but it is bad when he just strolls into Knockturn, finds a wand shop in the middle of the alley that sells/makes illegel wands, but isnt shut down by auror's for some reason... :shock: Suuuuure, I think Voldemort and all his Death Eaters would get custom made wands if they are more intune with your magic and make your spell casting more powerful. The actual idea for a custom made wand is good thou but there cant be a shop just waiting to be discovered by him and only him. I think a wand would take more than 1 hour to make as well.

    Harry being the heir of the founders and all that is overused. Thou, it can be done fairly well but only when it doesnt focus too much on it and especially when its only one founder he is the heir of, not fucking all of them plus Merlin.

    The martial arts thing in a few weeks pisses me off.

    How tall is Harry anyway. I know he's shorter than most people his age but a growth spurt would only make me average height at best. Most stories get him to drink some growth potion or something. Isnt such a bad idea but why doesnt everyone whose short and doesnt like being short do it? Well... I can understand if they dont do it because they are poor like the Weasley's but yeah.

    Griphook!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, annoying as hell. Really annoying when all magical creatures want to suddenly suck him off because of it aswell. Thou, I do believe he would get on with magical creatures better than most but it just isnt gonna happen because he said "Hey Griphook, I remember you!"

    Another cliche is a story always starting with Harry at Privet Drive crying over his dead Godfather. It fucking shits me reading about him having a sad about Sirius all the time. Its so annoying! GET ON WITH IT! (It's actually one thing JKR didnt dwell on and make me angry about in the sixth book but it doesnt make up for the rest of the clusterfuck as Midknight likes to call things :D)

    Okay, i've finished bashing things now.
     
  20. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Here is where I differ from most people on cliches... I can tolerate them as long as they are WELL WRITTEN!!!

    Custom wand... Sure why not. In Knockturn? HELL NO.

    I always figured Harry to be around 5'4-5'6 after 5th year. Short, scrawny, and just below average.

    I don't mind him growing taller with a potion or something... But my main question is: "why the hell would he want to?" I mean think about it, his size, or lack thereof is what has kept him alive in the past. He gets by through quickness and agility. Why sacrifice that for between 6 inches and 1 foot of extra height?

    Oh but here is the WORST cliche ever... Azkaban!Harry. Now before you shoot me let me explain. I actually LIKE Azkaban!Harry. What I don't like is how cliched the plot-lines are becoming. I mean jeez, is it to hard to ask for a little originality? Could you make him kill someone besides Hagrid or Ginny (yes I like seeing her die to... But there are ither ways to do it dammit, HARRY SHOULDN'T SUFFER BECAUSE OF HIS STALKERS DEATH!)/Some other close friend. Or would it be to much to ask of the writers to make him gain his super powers and infinite knowledge AFTER he leaves Azkaban instead of while he is sitting half insane in his cell? I don't dislike Azkaban!Harry... I just hate the authors who use the plot-line but aren't bright enough to invent their own story.
     
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