I give it a 4/5, the story is great. I might change the rating later, when there are more chapters out.

 

This is my first post so let my tell you that your story is great, I had though about a F S/N crossover with HP. Imagine my disappointment when i didn't find any story out there that satisfy my cravings. But I found yours which is great, Harry being a fictional character was a great spin I didn't expect. Keep up with the good work.

 

Normally, I'm not much into F/S N, but this is pretty interesting. I like how Harry ISN'T overpowered in this.

5/5

Also, feel free to ask me any questions about Japan to fill in gaps if you need to. I look forward to more.

 

So many anime Rins. Not all of them female. Rin from Shuffle! Shuffle! is my favorite. Busty elf girl for the win.

 

The latest update is quite good - although I may be biased, because it looks like we're heading for a PUNCH SHINJI in the near future.

 

Believe it not, this fic is actually why I started reading HP fanfiction. I never could get into the canon series. It was a fantastic world and obviously had and has the potential to be amazing, but there were just too many things that made me literally grind my teeth in frustration.
But F/SN is my favorite visual novel and UBW is one of my top 5 anime (though Saber is my favorite character and pairing). So thank you very much!