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Oneshot Final Battle, Pokemon Style by Zed Tea - K+

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Skeletaure, Sep 12, 2008.

  1. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    It was meh, up until the Gibberish attack - then I lol'd.

    3/5.
     
  2. Twisted

    Twisted Guest

    Lolol Voldemort is Confused got me. 3/5
     
  3. Goddessa39

    Goddessa39 DA Member

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    I mostly just stared in horror, but I can see where others may have laughed. Parody and humor in it must be in the actual writing in it. Goals of tinyfic were set and made. Meh. 2/5
     
  4. Kai Shek

    Kai Shek Supreme Mugwump

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    Meh, it kept me amused, but it wasn't really funny; which something so short really should be. 2/5
     
  5. hchan1

    hchan1 Sixth Year

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    Didn't find it funny at all, DH has been mocked so many times the jokes are getting old.
     
  6. Aurion

    Aurion Headmaster

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    3/5

    I'm feeling generous.

    Wonder just how much time I wasted on Pokemon when I was in elementary school...
     
  7. Novera

    Novera Seventh Year

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    Hmmm... I liked the 'VOLDEMORT is confused!, VOLDEMORT hit himself in his confusion' bit the best. I hated when that happened to my pokemon.

    2/5 for bring back fond (and not so fond) memories.
     
  8. Illution

    Illution Seventh Year

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    A lot of people in the general DLP age group has played a pokemon game at some point, so they get the reference. When I read it I really see the story in a gameboy sized screen and I laughed at the imagery of HP7 game on a hand held console when HP7 movie comes out.
     
  9. KeshinNoAkui

    KeshinNoAkui Seventh Year

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    Not nearly as amusing as it could have been. Could have used some more humor used in the various web-comics based on the games, like say tossing a PokeBall at Voldemort. 2/5 from me.
     
  10. Othalan

    Othalan Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I lol-ed. 3/5 for keeping me amused. Not as good as it could have been overall, but the good parts were very lulzy.
     
  11. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    It's no way a great piece of writing, but it's well worth it's time. I had a stupid smile on my face and the occasional laugh, which in something so short I think is good. 4.5/5

    I played Pokemon until a month ago.

    I WANT TO BE THE VERY BEST <3
     
  12. Clerith

    Clerith Ahegao Emperor ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It was very funny for me.

    And gave me an insane plot bunny I'll probe in my head for one night before falling asleep - for some reason, Harry has acquired pokeballs, and they seem to be working on humans... >_<" God smite me.
     
  13. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony ~ Prestige ~

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    Eh, it got a couple chuckles out of me, but it wasn't anything brilliant. 3/5
     
  14. Magus

    Magus Groundskeeper

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    Eeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhh... It made me smile once or twice (three times to be precise), but that was it.

    3/5
     
  15. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Meh. Not even remotely funny. 0/5
     
  16. KafkaExMachina

    KafkaExMachina Second Year

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    Bah. There were mistakes, yes, but there were lolz.

    And thus I deem it 4/5.

    /cheezy drunken WoW quote
    FOR THE LULZ!
    /end cheezy drunken WoW quote
     
  17. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    That was so retarded it was hilarious. 5/5
     
  18. HotIce

    HotIce Squib

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    I lulz'd at the summary of DH. Other than that, I rate 3/5
     
  19. reggin

    reggin Filthy Half-Breed DLP Supporter

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    Lulzy. It got a few chuckles from me, and was enjoyable. 5/5
     
  20. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    Good for passing about 30 seconds. And bringing up pleasantly nostalgic memories about lvl 100s and shinies. 2/5 purely for the 'Voldemort is confused' line.