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Abandoned Flawed Perfection, by SeriousScribble -T - Eragon

Discussion in 'Books' started by deathinapinkboa, Nov 19, 2008.

4.5999999046326/5, 5 votes
  1. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    Nov 19, 2008 #1
    Title: Flawed Perfection
    Author: SeriousScribble
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Drama
    DLP Category: Other Fandoms (Misc)
    Pairing: Eragon/Arya
    Chapters: 11
    Words: 98,929
    Updated: August 16, 2010
    Published: February 12, 2008
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Set after Eldest. He tried to forget her, but found that he couldn't. As Eragon struggles with his feelings and tries to understand Arya, he starts learning more about himself; all the while fighting to save Alagaësia. And there's still one last egg…
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4069618/1/Flawed_Perfection


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  2. Methene

    Methene Auror

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    Nov 19, 2008 #2
    I have read this story and I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed it. My opinion is biased due to the fact that I am rooting for Eragon/Arya, but that is unavoidable.

    The writing is very good, it flows smoothly. Also, a bonus point for the story is that the romance and discussions with Arya seem natural. Other Eragon/Arya stories that I have read either have crap full angst or turn into

    "Eragon I've been thinking and I love you," said Arya, "Wanna be my mate and have hot steamy sex?"

    Naturally Eragon, the smooth lover that he is picks her up and gives her the best sex she is ever had.

    This story avoids that masterfully, and there is a slow progression of the relation that only leaves you wanting for more.

    Excellent: 4.5/5, rounded to 5 because of direct comparison with others.
     
  3. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Apr 6, 2009 #3
    I updated with chapter 4. It's on ff.net (included there is also a short summary of the last chapters), as well as in the Non-HP WbA :)
     
  4. JWH

    JWH Unspeakable

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    Apr 9, 2009 #4
    Great stuff. I'd been waiting for the update, and you didn't disappoint.

    Basically what Methene said, I love your characterization of Arya. I've skimmed through the Inheritance section of ff.net, and this is undoubtedly the best of the fandom.
    4.5/5

    Moar, please ?