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Oneshot Foolproof by Lowlands Girl - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Xiph0, Apr 3, 2007.

3.7083332538605/5, 24 votes
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  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Apr 3, 2007 #1
    Title: Foolproof
    Author: Lowlands Girl
    Rating: NC-17
    Genre: PWP
    DLP Category: Restricted Section
    Words: 1933
    Pairing: Harry/Narcissa
    Status: Complete
    Summary: [Pre DH] Harry takes on a Polyjuice assignment as Lucius Malfoy, and runs into a bit of difficulty with Narcissa.
    Link: Skyehawke

    Average PWP with bondage kinks (spanking, whipping, ext), and Harry gets pwnt at the end.

    Made me laugh a few times, and given the rarity of the pairing I thought it was worth archiving.

    4/5


    Checked: July 24, 2012
     
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  2. raja

    raja Fourth Year

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    Meh, it was ok, the ending was pretty predictable though 3.15/5
     
  3. DemonDream

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    The ending was predictable, but the story was well written, and I like the pairing, so 3.5/5.
     
  4. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Apr 16, 2007 #4
    Ok for a quick read, I don't intend to put it on my watch list though. an all around so-so fic.

    2.5/5
     
  5. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Apr 19, 2007 #5
    Any other opinions and/or ratings for this story?
     
  6. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    I thought it was pretty good. Quick fun read. And plus points for the pairing.

    4/5
     
  7. DoWnEr

    DoWnEr Second Year

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    Apr 22, 2007 #7
    Seeing that it's clearly stated as a PWP i would give it 4/5

    It has everything a PWP should have. Meaning lot's of kinky sex and the pairing is a plus. The fact that Harry is boffing his hated rivals mom is kinky. Would've been nice if Harry got to boff his rivals wife.... well if Draco was married at least.
     
  8. haroon_angel

    haroon_angel Fourth Year

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    Apr 22, 2007 #8
    that was quite well written PWP and i really likes that pairing so i will give 4/5
     
  9. Setem1955

    Setem1955 Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Sep 24, 2007 #9
    I thought it was a quick fun read. 4/5 for me, too. As a PWP, it has what it takes.

    Yes, it was kind of predictable, but so was JKR's shitty epilogue. But that's for another thread.
     
  10. Vlad the Impaler

    Vlad the Impaler Muggle

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    HAHHAHAHAA MAN the look of his face when she said his name wow hahahahahahahah
     
  11. runghen23

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    Even pureblood princesses need some loving
     
  12. Wolfeinstein

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    Good one for PWP. Would have been extre kinky if he was banging draco Malfoy's wife and make it a threesome.
     
  13. golan

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    Oct 27, 2014 #13
    That's not too bad, but what is it with this "fucking someone's mother to stick it to him"?
     
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    .....

    /10char
     
  15. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    ....

    /banned
     
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    Knoq Temporarily Banhammered

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    ""Harry, Lucius always calls me by a pet name during sex, and he never calls out for Sirius in his sleep.""

    Yes/5.
     
  17. i5pure

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    Actual readable Harry/Narcissa are hard to come by, I enjoyed it 4/5
     
  18. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Come on man... you didn't even try and post something that contributed. :facepalm
     
  19. Slash17

    Slash17 Excrement Extraordinaire

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    Jan 13, 2016 #19
    Enjoyable to read. The pairing was done well.
     
  20. phazer11

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    Jan 15, 2016 #20
    Elaborate.
    Edit: Since apparently pointing out a shitpost counts as a shitpost.

    Elaborate on why it was "Enjoyable to read. The pairing was done well"
     
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