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Oneshot Freaky Thursday by Carly-M - K - Community

Discussion in 'Television and Movies' started by Alraune, Jun 4, 2011.

  1. Alraune

    Alraune Seventh Year

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    Title: Freaky Thursday
    Fandom: Community
    Author: Carly M
    Rating: K
    Genre: Humor
    DLP Category: Other/Misc
    Status: Complete
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    Summary: The group willingly swaps personalities for a day - what could possibly go wrong?

    Posted in the Community thread and now posting it here. Author really gets what makes the characters tick. It reads just like a episode of community.

    Solid 5/5
     
    Last edited: Jun 4, 2011
  2. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Wow. That was actually quite good. The author captured each of the character's voices almost flawlessly. It does lose something by being prose when the swapped personality device is much better suited to the screen - if only because it'd be easier to keep track of who's who. Freaky Thursday does a brilliant job of bringing the TV show's characters to life. There are plenty of Community-calibre laughs to be had.

    Five cools/5
     
  3. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I liked Community when it was on TV. But it has the failings of many of Harmons shows.

    Overall, this was enjoyable, and like Yak said its rather hard to keep track of who is who because the personality shift is better suited to being on screen, but fair execution. 3/5.

    8 ratings and 3 posts.

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