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Abandoned Fury of the Hellspawn by apocalypso - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Yarrgh!, Mar 9, 2006.

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How do you rate this fic?

  1. Outstanding

    44.2%
  2. Exceeds Expectations

    38.7%
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  5. Dreadful..Troll doesn't really exist in my mind.

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  1. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Title: Fury of the Hellspawn: The Tale of an Incubus
    Author: apocalypso (FicWad)/ Yarrgh! (DLP)
    Rating: NC-17
    Chapters: 5
    Published: March 7, 2006
    Updated: October 1, 2007
    Words: 55662
    Summary: Things have changed. Harry Potter is no longer the docile boy that we know. Constraints are freed as a young demon indulges his bloodlust. This is extremely graphic and violent, so take caution! NOT FOR KIDS!!!
    Link: http://ficwad.com/story/10931

    Well...my second fic.

    I'm not gonna bother posting it at FFNet, because it features graphic Hetero!Harry...something they don't like.

    I'm just blowing around with this fic, there won't be any regualr updates. The Chimera is my main fic right now.

    Tell me what you think.


    Checked: July 30, 2012

    Checked by Dark Syaoran, June 6, 2014
    Updated old Ficwad link.
     
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  2. Lord Nemesis Black

    Lord Nemesis Black Fourth Year

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    A very good start to a story I didn't really see any problems with the first two chapters other than in the first where it seemed that Voldy was explaing his actions to his servants,, To me he seemed weak and less powerfull than what JKR has made out to be. Other than that like i said I don't see any problems with it.
     
  3. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    yaargh unless you want to be locked in a closet with the hogwARTS BROMMSTICK UPDATE CHIMERA
     
  4. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    I sent Chapter 3 to my Beta Zero. I'm hoping to have fixed it up by saturday, so that's when the update will be.

    Cheers.

    And you! Necros! Don't threaten me with that! If i'm puking, that means i'm not writing...so it's not really conducive.
     
  5. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Necros is a bit insane...

    he's always prodding me for updates... but then again who wouldn't?

    I AM THE GREAT DEMON GOD OF CHAOS, AUTHOR SUPREME!!! * flashes a Lockheartesque grin before beign dragged away by men in white coats who promise to take him back to his home...*
     
  6. Rain

    Rain Pirate Navigator of the 7 Seas

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    .. You killed Hedwig?! :lol: That's so shocking it's amusing! Who has Harry willingly kill Hedwig? A great dark fic.
    It was most entertaining. ^_^ The Bella scenes were great too, oh! And torture scenes are not to be ignored.. ah, I just loved it. I look forward to more!
     
  7. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Yeah...the "hey girl" bit just got to me.

    So...why not? It's just an owl, even if it's been with him for five years.

    I hope you liked the bit witht he birthday cake and the memoria imperio potion.
     
  8. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    I really loved the story and I hope you update soon. Though i hope theres some explanations later on how Harry learned the Dark Arts Curses. Im guessing his link.
     
  9. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    If you noticed, in the first chapter, there was a scene where VOldmeort thinks that he has unbeatable oclumency/legilimency.

    The next line says "he was wrong."

    draw your own conclusions...i'm not gonna elaborate on that. It's something that i've been doing in both fics...just introducing concepts and not elaborating too much on them so that the reader has some freedom in what he/she wants to think.

    currently, i'm waiting to get chapter 3 of Chimera back from Zero, and i hopefully will have it posted by tomorrow.
     
  10. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    To all you similarly sick-minded freaks out there that still read this story, i should have chapter 3 up by tomorrow at the very latest.

    Some good torture coming up...Snape and Wormtail.
     
  11. Rain

    Rain Pirate Navigator of the 7 Seas

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    I'm looking forward to it! Snape and Wormtail torture? Sounds fun. :D
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

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    He didnt have to kill Hedwig... I mean, I dont care about it, but he should of just left her there. Shes not imporant...

    Anyway, I couldnt stop laughing at some of the scenes. Harry giving her a tit fuck made me laugh.

    I await more.
     
  13. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    True...of course, just leaving her there would ahve done it, but, hey.

    She might have follwed him, getting all uppity and shit for no reason.

    Better just to kill her. Plus, it was my strike out at all the people who love these scenes:

    Harry: Hey girl.

    Hedwig: Hoot!

    Harry: Oh, i love you, girl. Girl, girl, girl, girl.

    Hedwig: swoops down from rafters

    Harry: AAAAAAAHHH!!! My eye! You bitch!


    Thank you. THis has been a public service announcement from your neighborhood PETA-Hater
     
  14. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Updated today.

    Now, i'm off to find the WIzard of Oz- shit! No...i'm going away to find my muse. Chimera is bugging me, i can't get the chapter the way i want it.

    The way things are turning out, it will have a really slow start, something i'm fine with, but others might not like.

    Whatever.
     
  15. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    hey yarrgh how like till the broomstick becomes sludge and harry goes to gringots?
     
  16. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    *blink**blink*

    Say wha?????

    Good story btw. Looking forward to the next chapter.
     
  17. Rain

    Rain Pirate Navigator of the 7 Seas

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    A most entertaining chapter! :D Very amusing and exciting! I loved how Narcissa was brought in. Poor Draco. *malicious snicker*
     
  18. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Thanks.

    I thought it was about time that someone actually did something like that. THere was a discussion somewhere on DLP about HP/NM and what the effects on Draco were, and i just loved the idea of them doing it in front of him.

    So, there you are.

    Next chapter should be extremely graphic...two tortures, and then a revel. Dunno when it will come out though, i haven't even started thinking about writing it yet. I'm waiting for Chimera to pull through.
     
  19. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    I love this story.He was doing all kind of stuff to his girls.Doggy style,blowjobs and shit.And Dark to boot.
     
  20. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    BUMP!!!

    UPDATED!

    Let me know what you think...good, bad, ugly...you want my babies (not shit babies)?

    Oh...and use the rating scale in the Poll, s'il vous plait.
     
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