I'm not refering to the whole Stained-Future's badly written versions, I'm simply referring to the complete lack of actual interaction between the characters before they go at it like rabbits.

Not trying to offend you too badly, just didn't seem realistic.

And you're probably the second person to work out Nueb was a play on words for Noob.

 

Just read it, and I have one word to say...BRILLIANT!

I have to say, that was awesome. Harry's depravity, (and your's, apparently) know no bounds, and I think that is a characterization that has been missing from fanon. Can't wait for you to continue this, it's great.

 

superb

I hate to sound overly insane, but I love how you write Harry's sadistic streak. I adore his blood lust combined with sensuality, his cruelty with his intelligence, especially in his torture of captives: I can't wait to see more of it, notably the inevitable scene with Ginny.
I'm waiting on pins an needles for a Dumbledore scene and a Weasley scene. Please put a lot of time into those scenes because they will truly define who/what Harry has become. Keep up the awesome work at whatever pace allows you to produce such graphic, high quality work. I love how you write this, even if it is a secondary fic for you compared to Chimera.

 

Thanks, all.

I sent the latest chapter to my beta this morning. I hope to have it back tomorrow morning, and I'll make whatever changes are necessary. Hopefully, I'll be able to post it tomorrow evening or so.

Happy Friday Night reading

PS: 13000 word chapter ftw

 

Yarrgh!++

Good to hear! But how about an update on Chimera as well? Don't you think that would be superb?

 

Alright...it's updated.

I'm working on Chimera, but it'll take another week at the least.

Let me know what you think.

 

that house elf thing was massively fucked up my friend. gave me the chills just thinking about it. glad you didnt go into icky details on that one.

 

i find these accusations rude and offensive and if necessary i will challenge lord ravenclaw to a duel for my honor. and house elf sex is icky.

 

*gags at house elf part*

Otherwise, great chapter! I was slightly saddened to see the absence of Harry's physically vicious side, but his emotional torturing of Becka was cruel enough. I'm also looking forward to how Harry's plan with the Order is gonna turn out.

The part with Bella insinuating Ginny was a male was HILARIOUS! As was Harry punching the two Weasley females...or was it one male and one female?

*strokes chin thoughtfully*

 

Great update. I have a pretty strong intuition that Fleur is going to end up raped. Possibly bound with his demon powers, too. And I'm greatly looking forward to it.

 

Nice update. The House-elf.... that was wrong on so many levels. The rest was great through.

 

Pfft... There is no way Harry will need to rape Fleur. She was practically drooling when she saw him naked.

 

yarrgh can you make ginny like golem when she sees harrys wang then when she goes after it and corners harry the other kill her

 

>_<

NU!

(makes his post appropriately long :/)

 

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What?

 

I love this fic. Make Harry like rape The red headed whore , the Squirrel, and hell just about all the females in the Order. And like kill them slowly with dull spoons.

 

no no no no. he cannot touch ginny or hermione even for the purpose of rape. or i hope he cant. that would be far to dirty in my mind. frankly, house elf sex, greater sign, ginny sex.

house elf sex > ginny sex

 

Well...I'm glad you like it. No, Ginny won't get any. She will die a painful death. I've already written two well-recieved Ginny Kill-Off submissions...and I promise that this one will be better.

Hermione...not so sure. He might mark her, and then discipline her for being a presumptuous, arrogant whore. :/

Fleur should be a hopeful for the next chapter...but I don't know yet. I'll start writing it tomorrow.

 

Kill off Ron in the same way as malfoy except dont let Mrs. Weasley got marked I mean with the house elfs