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Good Boy by Tarie - NC17

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Amerision, Sep 17, 2006.

2.3333332538605/5, 6 votes
  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Sep 17, 2006 #1
    Title: Good Boy
    Author: Tarie

    Status: Complete/Oneshot

    Pairing: Ron/Narcissa
    Rating: M -> NC-17 [Semi-NonCon]
    Genre: Drama/Erotica
    Suggested Section: Restricted Section

    Link: http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/tarie/GB01a.html

    Summary: Ron takes a trip to Diagon Alley and becomes side-tracked by Narcissa Malfoy. (Ron/Narcissa)

    I know most of you guys hate Ron, but this was entertaining to me for the five minutes I spent on it.
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Sep 20, 2006 #2
    I seriously want to just delete this now, but I really want to know if anyone actually read this and their thoughts on this... thing.

    I mean, come on! Ron/Narcissa? No, wait. Ron/Non-HisHand? It just doesnt happen... though, I guess he does pin the tail on Hermione in some stories.
     
  3. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    Sep 20, 2006 #3
    Ive read it, and although it is not some mushy romance it made little sense as to why she did it. I could understand if it was just a cock tease, but to actually do it is pointless. If she really wanted some release she would have found a real man to do it.

    Not badly written, but some poor plot decisions.

    2.5/5
     
  4. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    Sep 20, 2006 #4
    It's actually not that bad. Narcissa is characterized right. Ron is just as stupid he is in canon. I give it a 3.5 out of 5.
     
  5. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Sep 21, 2006 #5
    It wasn't meant to be Pro-Ron, it's actually showing how weak-minded and stupid he is.

    Read it, and then judge please. Don't discriminate on the pairing.
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I believe if she wanted to get off so bad, she could have picked anyone other than Ron. This is hilariously stupid. But I wont delete it. This deserves to stay, even if it is in the 'Trash Bin'.
     
  7. SushiZ

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    Sep 21, 2006 #7
    i love stories where they display Ron as a fucking idiot, it makes my day, so thanks for that link.
     
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