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Oneshot Ground Hog Day by Rorschach's Blot - T - One Shot - Harry/Luna

Discussion in 'Humor' started by liath, Nov 17, 2006.

4.2272725105286/5, 22 votes
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  1. Adam

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    Dec 5, 2006 #21
    4.5/5. Ending was weak, rest was good. Pity it's not a chaptered fic.
     
  2. Nexus

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    Dec 7, 2006 #22
    Would have made a good multi-chaptered fic. And like everyone is saying the end was weak.
     
  3. Photon

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    Sep 17, 2013 #23
    And Verataserum. And "but he remembered it, which ment". And "allright", "dieing" instead of "dying".

    Interesting, funny, entertaining, I am rereading it again and I still like it. But new Obliviate not affecting him makes absolutely no sense. Also, ending is weak, going together to HQ makes even less sense.

    BTW, I see no way to turn it in decent multi chaptered story.

    It gets weak 5/5 from me (for Verataserum etc).
     
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