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Abandoned Hallowed Spirits by Scissorhands - M

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Shezza, Dec 27, 2006.

3.9000000953674/5, 10 votes
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  1. Hesuse Christe

    Hesuse Christe First Year

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    Dec 28, 2006 #21
    Excellent, if needing a beta. Like the violence against newspaper guy.
     
  2. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Dec 30, 2006 #22
    It has a good style and an interesting idea. 4/5
     
  3. Eleanor

    Eleanor Squib

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    Jan 8, 2007 #23
    VERY original. Three chapter up now and it going along quite well. Does anyone know if the author is joining DLP? I saw some requests on the reviews by members here :)
    If the author keeps it up, this story will be great. 4.5/5
     
  4. The Duke

    The Duke Seventh Year

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    Jan 8, 2007 #24
    This story is almost scary good/original...
    and I mean that in a good way.
     
  5. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Jan 8, 2007 #25
    I thought the last chapter was very boring. Lester seems to be canon!Harry, with the same friends and girlfriend, except he's a slightly better duelist, while Harry doesn't seem to be doing much of anything, except running around. 2/5
     
  6. The Duke

    The Duke Seventh Year

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    Jan 8, 2007 #26
    C'mon you can tell the guy is setting Harry up for SOMETHING...
    It also showed how Lester had grown up and what he had become which was necessary.
     
  7. Mordac

    Mordac Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Dec 30, 2007 #27
    This is being updated lately, and it hit a crucial point. Harry just met Romilda.
     
  8. Lucullus

    Lucullus High Inquisitor

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    Dec 31, 2007 #28
    I stumbled upon this fic some time ago while I was searching for Harry/Romilda, but I simply couldnt get into it. Might try again another time.
     
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