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Oneshot Happiness in Azkaban by Myst Shadow - K

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Kravot, Feb 24, 2011.

  1. azrael

    azrael Professor

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    I think it was excellent-though the angst on Harry's part sounded kind of silly and pathetic compared to the rest of the fic, the end wrapped it up very well. Surprisingly, this is the first story I can remember reading in all my time in the fandom that actually tried to resolve this question, so perhaps that is why I think it well deserves a 5/5
     
  2. Gulliver

    Gulliver Second Year

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    I really enjoyed this. There were a few annoying things like retarded italics and pointless parentheses that detracted from my immersion in the story, but these annoyances were but footnotes in this fic's epic ass.

    4/5
     
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