Yupp you're right, I mean look what she made out of Tonks.

 

I think Sheeza said hes working on Andacardia and revealations first then Future remapped. he didn't think he'd finish War of the Dark... a pity

 

Yeah I dunno why Ancardia is a giant clusterfuck, and Future remapped went to shit around the ritual time in the 50's chapters.

I gave up on War of the Dark, I just read it early this morning, and when I saw it'd been 4 months almost since last update I felt I wasted my time. Authors should at least put Abanonded for shitty story or something in big bold letters in every chapter so we know not to get into reading it

 

I have never been able to bring any emotion forward but hate when an author takes the story so AU it ceases being HP, and pretty much just becomes another world with some minor connections to the HP canon universe.

 

I didn't mind Bellatrix and Narcissa joining in on Furutre Remapped. Hell of a lot better than the Bellatrix/James pairing Shezza was hinting at beforehand. Anyway, the rituals did sort of mess things up. There were other things about it that I wasn't too fond of, particularly all of the elemental stuff. I most like that fic for the battle scenes anyway. Shezza does the best fights of any author I've seen in fanfiction.

 

The ritual destroyed the story, because of the radomness that just didn't fit in there.

 

i cannot agree with you more..

i try to make it as much HP as possible only i have the fatal flaw of not making too many dialogue and not too many fight scenes...

 

It just irks me when chapt 1 is HP universe, then all of a sudden he's in some out of the world universe with nothing but OC's, yet it's not billed as a crossover, or mentioned heavy OC usage.

At least warn me when a fic has nothing that I'd read it for.

 

hmm... i have that problem too...

soem freaks decide that they want to make a crossover and then throw him into a new realm with no way to turn back and then he's lefrt to fend for himself with a girl who seems to be nothing out of the ordinary but then changes into his true love...

that sickens me...

hermione is the girl i mentioned and i think of jher as a beaver in human guise...

 

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No way, Robin4 kicks ass at that shit in her UU trilogy.