What he said. I attempted to read that story a while ago, lured by the temptation of H/Fleur/Tonks. Obviously, I clicked the big red X real fast after reading this awful list.

 

That list makes my eye-holes cry. Eesh. Ah, well, I'll try to get some more chapters of Goblet of Mist up. Yeah, it's not the best out there, but Fleur should be making an appearance soon, and that's the sole reason why I have any readers, right?

@List: couldn't you have stopped after the first page of A4?

 

What, and not even a single and entirely too obvious "over 9000" joke?

 

This story is like all those h/ginny stories where they both become gods.

 

I haven't looked at one of those for so long I can almost
ignore they exist, thanks for warning me against this one.

 

@Belial: (Insert random comments expressing rage here)
/rage

Anyways...

*reads list of qualifailcations*

Off-topic, but could I beat a shadow mage with a flood lamp? Just sayin'...

 

@ Andromalius: Yes

 

He was saying "Dont you have shame" in a kind way maybe you sould reconsider your answer. Seeing that piece of shit isn't even considered by myself as a fanfic. It has no place in a holy place like this

 

And with your extraneous spurts of vomit and shit masquerading as brain activity (and I haven't even gotten into the horrendous spelling and grammar) make you just the person to criticize others here.

GTFO out of my DLP, you bandwagoning piece of shit.

 

Skipped the meds today, Silens?

Thanks for the well-wishes, Belial DCLXVI. I ran across Intellectual Seeker's fic some time ago, but found many things not to my taste (starting a tale with a D&D-esque character sheet was one of them; I gently mocked the concept with my story, India). I recall leaving a review and exchanging several PM with the author afterward to offer advice on how he could improve. He put the story on hiatus and joined RC for a time to work on his skills.

I've not picked it up since to see if it's improved. Judging from the response you've gotten, I suspect it's still not yet to DLP standards.

 

Though now they also have a Ninja and Battle Mage that is super scary the only way it could be better if they could fly without Tinker Bell.

 

You do know I was mostly joking right? but if criteria for criticize others here is to have extraneous spurts of vomit and shit masquerading as brain activity you sould do it.

possibly true considering it isn't my native language but I do my best.

 

@tasoli: you will never, ever, have to explain/justify yourself to the AngelofDreams.

Ever. :awesome

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5580951/1/Veela_Charm

I found this Veela Harry story today. It started off with older women having the hots for Harry. Warning, there is Harry/Petunia (they are not related according to author) on first chapter. The story is plain but there is the WTF element that makes you want to see what type of weird ideas the author will come up with.

 

Writing is shit, the idea is boring, the 'smut' is awfull. Not even worth reading imo.

 

Yeah, I thought so and that is why I didn't bother put it up under the review section. This guy has a weird fetish which revolved around the bathroom. Petunia stepping on Harry's cum WTF#_#.

 

That part gives me AFF flashes for some reason.

 

Stories of this quality are mostly the reason I'm over my Harry/Multi phase.

 

That's sounds familiar, argghhh, where have I heard that before? Was it the :banana: guy?

Well after reading the smut fic I have to say it's not really a smut fic. Seems more like a summary. My advice to the author, if he is on this forum (I suspect he is) is to take his time with each character. I personally don't know jack shit about Hermoine's mother, her motivations, why she is doing this, etc. The Petunia incest is pretty strange, though I have yet to see one author pull off a good HarryPetunia aside from Big D.

The spelling and grammar are not awful, it's bad, but it could improve. The plot itself, well it needs a plot, but it is creative. Bad, but original.

2/5.