This story is pretty good at the present moment, but with only three chapters up, I can't give you a rating. I did notice that at certain parts, you have a tendency to over-explain. Other than that, it seems pretty solid.

 

There is a new chapter up. I really like it. Based on this chapter it makes me wonder what come next. I am looking for ward to it. I give this chapter a 4.5/5.

 

Next month with goblins? Poor Harry, I am sure he would be forced to eat some crawling goblin food.

 

A great update, like always. Everything flowed real well, and I liked how he eventually, albeit grudgingly, earned his temporary masters respect. The bit where he thought he was somehow turned into a vampire was pretty lulzy and a nice touch. 4.5/5

 

Can't for Harry to be apprenticed by the goblins(if that's who's next). Should prove interesting how Harry will adapt to the goblin he's apprenticed to, and what he'll be learning from them.

 

Don’t Goblins eat raw meat? Not like fish but beef and pork to. I like my steak rare, but not that rare.

All together it was a great chapter. The flow was nice. I spotted no big errors in grammar. Also I got a bit of personal satisfaction out of Harry breaking Vaclar and Zarek’s necks. Had to smile at that.