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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Black Hearted Auror by Darth Cious - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Galleon, Jun 10, 2008.

3.5714299678802/5, 28 votes
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  1. Admonkeystrator

    Admonkeystrator Seventh Year

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    Jul 23, 2008 #61
    I'm new and don't understand much yet.
    But i'm being quickly drawn in by this fic.

    Sure it starts of a little stuttery, but imo, very few fics start off well.

    Long story short - I think this author has a terrific grasp of descriptive imagery, that has been able to make me grin and even lol, since chapter 3. (i love the description of Big D's smile, and the sound of Malcom's injury).

    Overall I think it's one of the better fics i've read, as it's less gushingly fanboi, and more entertaining to read then most... which of course is the whole point of Fiction in general.

    4/5
     
  2. Seer

    Seer First Year

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    Nov 6, 2008 #62
    This seems to be among the last few fics this site features that's still being updated. I like Jbern, but some variety would be nice
     
  3. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Nov 6, 2008 #63
    Please take a heartfelt triple WTF.

    One, I don't know what you're talking about. If you mean something like this, I don't feel like quoting either Sree or myself. Go read it yourself.

    Two and three:

    That's just about five months. You defeated your own argument, and necro'd a topic for no reason. Insert more intelligence into your post, it's lacking.
     
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