Title: Harry Potter and the Dragon Warriors
Author: Goddess of Ran
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure
Pairing: HP/OC
Status: In Progress
Summary: On one side of the battlefield, the Order of the Phoenix continues to fight on through constant recruiting and vigorous training. While on the other side, Voldemort decides to speed up his plans of conquering both the magical and muggle worlds as well as taking out the one obstacle in his path, the boy who lived. But as soon as word of this got out through one of the Order’s spies, a third party decides that they too should hurry up with their plans. Who are they? And what do they have want with Harry?
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2405648/1/

 

I did the same, skimming a bit I realized why. Normally I'm partial to playboy Harry, but this one was too full of weirdness. Couldn't figure out what was happening so I dropped it. Gonna check it again later.

 

Yeah, I think I stumbled once upon this story, but for the life of me I don’t know why I didn’t keep on reading. I'll put in on my ever growing list of things to read, and comment on it once I find what discouraged me from reading the first time.

I am a picky bastard, after all.

 

Damn Sya do you actually manage to read a story with out uping and leaving it? heheh meh thought the story well not worth my time after a frew chapters. Let us know if it gets better madeye's

 

it seems quite complicated and confusing in the first couple of chapters... it looks like it could have potential though

 

Well I have to admit that it starts of a bit boring but that's just the way I wrote it. Besides, I've tried to change it but every time I try I end up spoiling something instead. So I just hope you'll have a bit of patience to read through the story until I get to some of the less boring aspects.

 

Not boring at all, just hard to understand. I think there was too many pronouns denoting extra characters at the same time... so I got confused as hell...I think.

edit: yeah, I went back through it. It's that you add I think 3 different sets of OCCs and we get maybe names for just half of them and little else.

I know part of it is to keep it secret, but using some markers of somesort for the few "major" ones would help, like physical feature, clothing color or anything. So when I see a scene with hooded figures, a guy and a girl...I don't know if they appeared before or not because there's no way to identify them... and that makes it really hard to understand...am I making sense?

I could explain it more specifically once i ah...read the story again lol.

edit2: Part of it might also be because I guess you are fooling around with time travel/dimen travel/flashbacks and what not...and mixes of all three....as well as a sex changing Harry...

wait...how did that happen? Lol, I'm really hoping I just skipped that cause things like that really throws a reader when you have a jumboed story already.

 

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kind of a weard story

 

The sex changing part will be explained in the next chapter I'm making. Well if this is already complicated then you don't really have to worry since a lot of things will be explained in the next chapter.

Anyway, just be patient with the story for now. It'll explain itself soon.

 

You are braver then me then. You should be a Gryffindor. *nods*

 

Alright everyone, chapter 8 is now up. It introduces who some of the OC's are that you've seen in the previous chapters. Oh by the way, it looks like the sex-changing part will be explained in the next chapter and not the one I just posted. Sorry about that

Well, tell me what you think about it once you're done reading it.Ü

 

Alright everybody. Here's my Christmas to all of you. Chapter 9 of Harry Potter and the Dragon Warriors. Find out who the mysterious new Dark Lord is and who Harry's real father is. Read it to find out.

 

I've read this some time ago and I have to say that your idea for Harry's real father was a bit er... strange. Strange, but interesting. What made you think of that idea?

 

Well, maybe it's just how I think but I don't really see too much of James Potter in Harry, with the exception of appearances of course. Also it could explain how Harry's wand was chosen as well as how he became a Parselmouth. And to be honest the thought of Snape as Harry's father scares the hell out of me so that's out of the question.

Besides, it's an idea I haven't really seen around or even heard about. Voldemort adopting Harry, done. Harry joining Voldemort, done. Harry IS Voldemort, done. But this is something I haven't really seen yet. Besides, it just helps play along with the rest of the story. Specifically after the Harry VS Harry part of the story.

 

Well now that you mention it I guess it makes sense. Sort of. So... any chance at getting a hint as to what happens to Harry in the next chapter?

 

No chance. Although I'd consider it if you can guess what happens. If you get it right or you get close enough I might consider it.