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Harry Potter and the Druid Pathway by Alan Wilks - PG13

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Anonymous, May 1, 2005.

  1. Anonymous

    Anonymous Guest

    Title: Harry Potter and the Druid Pathway
    Author: Alan Wilks
    Rating: PG13
    Category: Action/Adventure/General
    Summary: Harry’s views begin to change as he undergoes his magical maturation and also begins his discovery of the Old Ways. Whilst at odds with Dumbledore, Harry must come to terms with his role in the rising war but will he find balance in the dangerous magic...

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2322376/1/

    have a go. you will like it.


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  2. serena

    serena Guest

    The problem is that the author has stopped writing this fiction. He has started another one where, instead of studying on his own, he is apprenticed to Nicholas Flamel : Harry Potter and the Temptations of Independence. Here is the link :
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2351978/1
    It's a very good fic also.
     
  3. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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  4. I like this story, and I think it is a pity it has not been updated as of yet. Rather, it has been aloud to 'sit' for two months. Please, do update this. Your ideas are welcomed, and your writing is great!
     
  5. realmess

    realmess Slug Club Member

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    H. Potter and the Temptations of Independence by Alan Wilks

    I think that's the story:

    Title:Harry Potter and the Temptations of Independence
    Author: Alan Wilks
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure/General
    Pairing: none as of chapter 2
    Status: WIP
    Summary:Harry’s views begin to change as he undergoes his magical maturation and also begins his discovery of the Old Ways. Whilst at odds with Dumbledore, Harry must come to terms with his role in the rising war but will he find balance in the dangerous magic...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2351978/1/

    but the story hasn't been updated for a while.
     
  6. Knox

    Knox The Last Remnant DLP Supporter

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    i think it is a good story and should be updated it is not as cliche as most hp:wizard: storys with a more origanal pairing:banana:
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    You do realise that you bumped a thread over a year old, right? And its your first post, so that means you havnt even made an introduction thread.

    This is your first warning. And it's also your only warning. It isnt hard to read the dates.

    It doesnt mean you cant comment on old threads, it just means you have to post something pretty damn good instead of what was.
     
  8. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    dark lord knox it would appear that we have at least seen some of the same shit because i know i have seen that pic of tsunade before now. but yeah, i like the one with flamel a little better. hopefully he sticks with it
     
  9. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    This one needs to go. It's been abandoned for four years and it only has 14k mediocre words.

    The author is overly fond of exposition, and there are huge blocks of text which make the story almost unreadable. In the first five chapters, Harry gets a book on occlumency, builds impenetrable mental shields in less than two weeks, and 'finds' his magic within himself (making him instantly uber-powerful).

    All of the other post-OotP cliches are there, including Griphook, Sirius' will reading, manipulative Dumbledore, and the clunky introduction of Blaise Zabini as a future romantic interest.

    2/5, because these weren't really cliches four years ago, I guess
     
  10. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I second Mike's statement. Both stories haven't been updated for four years.

    The thread should be deleted.
     
  11. AcheronBlake

    AcheronBlake Squib

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    All in all I found the story enjoyable. I mean, it hasn't updated in almots 5 years and the power-up is fantastical it was entertaining and it should get points for its potential. Although the power-up isn't terribly cliche unlike most Post 5th year Harry Power Up stories.
     
  12. Kerrus

    Kerrus DA Member

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    holy necrotic threads, Batman!
     
  13. Stenstyren

    Stenstyren Professor

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    The only good I got out of reading this was Knox first post which was retarded to say the least:)

    1/5, this does not even belong in the almost recommended thread.
     
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