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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Era of Hogwarts by Lord Ravenclaw - T

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Lord Ravenclaw, Apr 2, 2005.

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  1. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Jan 8, 2006 #61
    I'm with Mad-eyes on this one. This story is TOO good to only be updated TWICE a YEAR!!! :evil: :evil: :evil:


    Ravenclaw, I would say "Update Soon!" but you just have so...UPDATE SOON!!
     
  2. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 8, 2006 #62
    I'm working on a Heir of Silvertongue update right now...about 10% done with that, then I'm on to EoH again.
     
  3. MadEyes

    MadEyes Seventh Year

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    Jan 8, 2006 #63
    I say, I say, you should dump Silvertounge for the moment and concentrate on EoH, bacuse its my favorite, and my word is law! So let my will be done and provide us with a new chapter of EoH tomorrow at 10:15 a.m.

    So I have said, so shall it be! :wink:
     
  4. ChuckDaTruck

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    Jan 8, 2006 #64
    GREAT!!! I love both. Equally.

    Don't MAKE Me choose!!! How can you ask me to choose one child over the other!!


    :Goes storming off:
     
  5. MadEyes

    MadEyes Seventh Year

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    Jan 8, 2006 #65
    Its quite easy, really. You choose the youngest brat and be done with it. In this case, EoH is the youngest, so its my favorite. Simple, see?
     
  6. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Jan 8, 2006 #66
    Silvertongue's first few chapters suck, but it's getting better and better. You shouldn't just drop it... maybe rewrite it?
     
  7. ChuckDaTruck

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    Jan 8, 2006 #67
    Yep. I've actually posted my opinion on Silvertongue in its forum in Independent Harry. So, um, Yeah.

    I think IP82 is right though. See reasons there. :D :D :D :wink:
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 8, 2006 #68
    I personally prefer EoH, but Heir of Silvertongue is where I can let my mind go wild and do whatever I want, while still forging a story. I'm also implementing more humor elements.
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

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    I also prefer EoH
     
  10. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    EoH is god! :p
     
  11. IndoGhost

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    Jan 8, 2006 #71
    gotta go with EoH
     
  12. Lord Osiris

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    Jan 8, 2006 #72
    I would certainly agree with the others and say that EoH is number 1 only because i believe it's constucted and has a far better plot to that of silvertongue...still they both rule, and as far as im conserned im happy to wait 2 weeks for an update.
     
  13. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Jan 8, 2006 #73
    Add some Harry/Alicia interaction to Silvertongue
     
  14. ChuckDaTruck

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    NOO!!!!!


    Build it slow. Like long hot, sexy foreplay. Then it increases the PLEASURE exponentially. Mmmhhhh, yeah. Awkward conversation between Harry and Alicia. That's hot. :wink:
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

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    I thought she was going to be crushed by Grignott's golden doors....
     
  16. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jan 8, 2006 #76
    probably is gonna be... either way Era gets my vote as the better of the two... dunno... think im just a raving Rowena Ravenclaw fanboy or something...
     
  17. Dark Syaoran

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    I think I am too... not enough Rowena around!
     
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    i would say keep on at EoH then go back and rewrite the HoS. In response to the comment abut awkward convo's ok please don't, they are boring as hell to read
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

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    I was kidding about awkward conversation. Seriously, GET ALICIA out of there. No moments like,


    We both reached for the last apple at the same time, and our hands connected. I grinned and looked down at my shoes. I was about to offer her the apple when she started to speak also. We smiled at each other again. Then I realized that our fingers were still touching. Awkwardly, I jerked my hand backward." :puke:
     
  20. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jan 8, 2006 #80
    Nothing that awkward. Any awkward scenes I might do would be amusing, such as her getting embarasses by Harry, but she was holding her wand and accidentally causes all his hair to be shaved off.
     
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