yeah a good chapter though we still do not know the animagus form although it is a brid so i think augery? anyway nice chapter however it lacks romance. harry/blaise action needed.

 

Sorry for neglecting you guys. Chapter 8: A Nott in Time Saves Nine is up.

I have a yahoo group up as well at: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Freelancehero/
if you wanna chill out there.

Read and Review

 

i read and actually liked the story. i wish the person who speaks to castus is blaise. however that seems unlikely. i only hope he/she is a logical choice. i mean he/she has to be someone who is in the order because the trunk is in hq. and it will be ridiculus that someone has the ability of parseltongue from the order because it will be known. so there are three choices in my opinion. first blaise because she is new at hq and we donot know her background. may be she is parseltongue and just discovered that she is one or after the attention harry got in his second year she held back and never told anyone she has the ability.

the other choice is harry. i mean his other self who used the time turner. this choice is the most logical one.

the other choice is an OC which we do not know.



also please update soon.

 

that was a great chapter
I think it would be the other harry
we're all waithing for more updates

 

Finally, Chapter 9: A Short End to a Long Summer is up.

For all you lazy bums, here is a link to Chapter 8 and all you have to do is click next (all I want in return is for you to leave a review):

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2349588/8/

I can't do a link directly there yet, it takes like 24hrs to appear on my computer

 

great chap, itd been like 2 days since you posted it so hurry up, i'm impatient, lol.

Good job, stories coming along well not much advice that i can give except keep on keeping on

 

Nice work man just when the bloody heck you going to kill off the manipulative old cogger

 

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that was anunexpected twist but now that i think about it it sorta fits cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work

 

I apologise profusely to Lord Ravenclaw. I do not have the patience or excellent observations of Zevrillon; I am too hotheaded. Now that I think of it, I didn't think that a fellow author would make such hideous grammatical errors. I should have ignored it and I apologise again to Lord Ravenclaw. I have calmed down and realise I was a prat.

FF.net cannot ban this person because he is annonymous. He is an immature little berk and I will take down his reviews.

I was unaware of Lord Ravenclaw's position here but I knew he co-founded it or something, so I didn't pick up on this fact.

Once again I apologise for my childishness to Lord Ravenclaw and everyone else. I should change my name from Master Slyterin to Stupid Gryffindor.

Master Slytherin (aka Stupid Gryffindor)

P.S. Please Update Era of Hogwarts, It's really good!

 

YOur Story Kicks A$$

Yo, Master Slytherin, Your story kicks butt. F*&^ that MF posing as the Lord. Don't sweatr that b*&%h. Keep coming with the updates man. I can't wait to see where you take this story next. JUST DON't Have Harry wimp out (I think JK is going to do that to Harry and Have him be all pathetic...) Anyway keep it up. 8)


Hey charlie dont use so many cuss words when you post man, its great that your posting but you dont need to cuss.
Thanks

 

Master Slytherin if he/she aint got the ball to use their own name then it aint worth it dont respect them by giving him/her your time.your fic is grate i cant wait for the next update

 

Chapter 10 is up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2349588/9/

Here we go. Just click next for the new chapter.

Read and Review

 

love the ch but lost with the whole DA training thing but no realy i love the ch

 

Well, my story has been removed because "Not allowed: interactive, chat/script, real person, mst, and etc." You don't know how angry I am right now. :evil: I won't ruin this site by reaming off a lot of swear words at their incompetence. How many other authors "chat" to their readers? I'll re-post the story, though, I'm not gonna let some bitches stop it from re-appearing. :twisted:

I do have another fic up which I think is even better than FH. It's called 'Vox of Vicis' and I have big plans for it. 8)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2444660/1/

Give it a try and review please.

A very annoyed Master Slytherin

 

i cant believe the removed FH... assholes... a god fic and they had to lose it

 

.. this only affirms my belief that FFn must be overthrown!!

 

not working

hey, i really want to read your story but the fanfiction link is not working, and when i search your user name or the story name, i find nothin, if you could tell me when its up, that would be great. Thanks

 

Hmm well that's BS, that's the only story I've ever found where I liked Ron.

Ah well I've seen it on other sites, guess I'll track it down.

You ever get around to looking into those links I sent you Dark?