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Harry Potter and the Freelance Hero by Master Slytherin - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Anonymous, Apr 17, 2005.

  1. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    After an absolutely overwhelming turnout, I'm going to continue as it is ;)

    Also, Ron is already Harry's friend <_< >_>

    But Hermione isn't ;)
     
  2. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    SWEET! I hate the know-it-all bitch Hermione.


    Update, dude, I can't wait to read it.
     
  3. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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  4. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Dude, I can't review of FF, but I love what you have done. Harry isn't too powerful, and I loke how you have removed Ron and Hermione from the picture. THis is shaping up to be great. I hope you have more stuff with Slytherin's ancestor. I figure he should get back into parsel magic and stuff. Anyway, I hope you update again soon.
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    *chants* Get rid of Ron! Get rid of Ron! *chants*

    lol.

    Yeah!
     
  6. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    I'm afraid he's not getting rid of Ron, just forcing him to grow up!

    Thanks for all the positive reviews!
     
  7. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Your story is one of my favorites out there dude.


    I really hope you update again soon.

    Maybe you could consider getting rid of Ron.


    The Charmer :wink:
     
  8. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    New Chapter! Harry's Madness. It's mainly aftermath and stuff.

    I have included Horcruxes as they are a good idea.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2471735/8/

    You know the deal. Read and Review!
     
  9. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Does anyone know of any experienced, good authors so that they can continue Freelance Hero because I've lost interest tbh. I'd prefer if they weren't a slash writer and if they were an Independent Harry writer.

    Sorry to FH lovers, but hey, that's the way it is.
     
  10. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    What happened? I click the link and I get "Story Not Found". :!:
     
  11. Burt

    Burt Fourth Year

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    It's been taken down. If you look at the guy's userpage, it's not listed there anymore.
     
  12. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    I change the link in the first page of this topic to the guy who took over MS story.
     
  13. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    The story has...passed on...to Lord Vitiris.

    The link to his mysterious profile is in my bio.

    I'd like to take this opportunity to advertise my main story Other Side of Hell to you whose link is below. That story is, in my not so humble opinion, a lot better.

    Well, enjoy!

    MS
     
  14. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    This is pretty bad. MS/lordvitris accomplishes portraying Voldemort as a cliched generic evil villain in the very first sentence:

    There's some dicking around with the Dursleys, Harry finding an exceptionally intelligent pet snake he can converse with in Parseltongue and get this: he's wandering Diagon & Knocturn Alley dressed like a dementor. Someone get carried away trying to write Harry's appearance as menacing and cool.

    Dialogue tags make no sense and are seemingly chosen at random:

    1/5.
     
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