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Harry Potter and the Lantrisi by JohnDeath - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by The Mysterious Nobody, Aug 31, 2007.

  1. Bukay

    Bukay Professor DLP Supporter

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    I've got mixed feelings about this one...

    The trick with highly advanced vampires was, at least, interesting. However where is the fun when you have an allmighty, unitied race? Some inner fights or fractions might add a bit of spice to the general idea...

    The most disappointing thing in this story is the character of Harry Potter... He IS a 600 years old vampire (not to mention assassin and fleet commander) and he still acts like a teenager with more power backing his actions... The author should ask himself how he wants his main character portrayed and stick to it...

    all in all, a decent story, good enough to read if you want to kill some time. However it's nothing exceptional and doesn't deserve a place in our library...

    3/5
     
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