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Dead Link Harry Potter and the Libido War by wicked wicked boy - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by ip82, Oct 15, 2006.

  1. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Libido War
    Author: wicked wicked boy
    Genre: Humor/Romance
    Rating: M
    Status: WIP (10K ATM)
    Pairings: H/Hr, H/G, H/Parvati, H/Muggle OC
    Suggested category: "Humor" (or "Romance")
    Summary: Harry fights with his conscience and his libido, in an attempt to do the right thing while trying to satisfy his seemingly unquenchable needs. What to do in a world where EVERYBODY wants you? Reissue.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3164354/1/

    Basically, post-war Harry is going around, hitting on various girls, dating them, having sex with them, cheating on them etc... And all the while he's guided by two voices in his head - his 'conscience' (angel) and 'libido' (devil).

    This is certainly not an award-winning story; plot is almost non-existent, real-world dialogues are exagarated and the setting unrealistic. But none of this prevented me from laughing my arse off at some of the jokes and general idea behind the thing.

    4/5


    Checked by Minion, August 18, 2013
    Dead link is dead. If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 18, 2013
  2. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    I love it so far, although I just know something will eventually happen that will annoy the hell outta me and make me drop the fic, but for now it's really entertaining, 4/5
     
  3. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    it plays kinda like those dating sims or games where you try to get laid and you get two options evey once in a while. pretty amusing, but nothing spectacular. 3/5
     
  4. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    I loved this story.

    It's funny in that quick, easy, superficial way.

    Recommended 4/5
     
  5. Wasteland

    Wasteland Second Year

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    My God this story has no real point whatsoever, but incredibley funny. 4/5
     
  6. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Its odd...I'll give it that. Kinda funny, but not spectacular in any reach of imagination.

    3/5, more accurately a 2.5, but i'll give it the benefit of doubt :p
     
  7. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I thought it was crap...

    This had a neat idea and all but the execution was very poor in my opinion. No plot (even stupid humors have plotlines most of the time) and the jokes weren't funny..

    I give it a 1/5

    Trashbin
     
  8. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It's not what I would call a good story, but it did make me laugh a bit...

    I wouldn't quite say that it's worthy of the library, but I think we should keep it around, so I say put it in the Trash Bin.

    3/5
     
  9. bloodmage

    bloodmage Backtraced

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    I remember coming across this a few weeks ago. It was wonderfully funny, with Harry having two voices in his head. The good guy and his libido. Hilarious and original! Highly recommended, because it is very funny.

    4.5/5 (Length would make it 5.)
     
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