Raping the Challenger

Why does the rating have anything to do with the fact that this fic sucks monkey balls? I was bitching about you waisting my time, not waisting time in general. I find waisting my own time quite enjoyable, which rather keeps it from being a waist of time.

My, I do believe it thinks I'm a lady. Boy, you are going to be in for a nasty shock one of these days.

I won't contest the prude comment.

I'm still confused as to why the "'Bachelor's degree in Norse mythology'" is such a big deal to you. It doesn't matter sweet-cheeks. The only thing that I can conclude is that you are responsible for this little peice of excrement call a fic. I can thing of no other reason that a little dear like you would defend it.

Do as "Lady" Death says: tuck you tail firmly between your likes (it will help keep this shit from leaking out you gaping ass-cunt) and scamper off to some dank hole where you can nurse your wounds and live to fic some other day.

 

I usually don't like to kick a wounded animal but... you deserve it. And that Norse Mythology? I call bullshitz. If the fic is any indication of the author's mind, then the bastard/bitch probably transfered some STDs for that 'degree'.

 

Well, there's a reason the author never promoted this story here. He's just learning to write, and he knows damn well he's not good enough but he really isn't trying too hard, either. He says so, right in the first chapter. People who likes smut primarily and storytelling as a distant third will go for it, as will people who can find the jokes and finds them funny.

I've advised him on technicalities, but i agree with the 1/5 rating. He's barely trying, sometimes but he was laughing like hell when he told me about this thread. Apparently, he thinks you people got it right.
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What the fuck? Can't they be even SLIGHTLY more creative in their choice of Japanese words?! GREEN NIGHT?! Also note, anyone who is actually named "Midori", is invariably a girl. That is NOT a boy's name here in Japan.

 

Poor spelling/grammar, furries, hentai jokes, and a reference to "pee in her butt"... This, my friends, is the first ever crossover between Harry Potter and 4chan.

 

I think this story may very well be the first flat 1.0 in the history of this site.

 

Not any longer, not that you've voiced it. Some killjoy will take it upon himself to rate it a 2. Or maybe even a 5.

Heaven forbid.

 

I LOL'D.

This story is utter awesome and you bitches need to realize that. When else are you gonna read about someone taking a piss in someone's asshole?! Or having four tits?

 

That's the point, we won't.

As for the tits, it's all about quality, not quantity. There shall be two, no less, no more. And remember, when we do have four-titted women, we'll be competing with men with four penises.

Amen to that.

 

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Ahem.

 

Whoops. Hadn't seen that one.

 

ok I admit that the story isint very good but you guys are just insulting each other and not saying much about the fix. get over yourselves