Title: Harry Potter and the Power of Bonds
Author: Kyrissean Angelis
Rating: M
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Status: WIP
Pairings: Official H/Fleur, seems like H/Many
Summary: The Dursleys get rid of Harry at the age of 5, when an elderly man finds him on the streets he takes Harry in and they travel the world together learning different magic’s. H returns for 4th year triwizard! H!Fleur eventually.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2585393/1/

Very AU, powerful grey playboy Harry, lot of OC's, good Dumbledore, Ginny bashing. Everything is OK with idea, but the writting is...

It's not exactly bad, as in illiterate, but more like extremely rushed. It's like someone was jumping on this guy's balls while he was typing this shit - lot of typos, rushed explanations, stupid sentences... see for yourself.

In general, readable story but nothing spectacular.

 

I tolerated it up until the end of the most recent update. Then Harry got Sorted into two houses and I immediately lost all interest in the story. 'Slytherclaw' my milky white arse. Cliches like dual Sortings just need to be done away with.

 

I found it pretty hard to follow like you said ip82 it skips so much! dont worry Lord Serapheth he only ends up in Ravenclaw but yeh still stupid duel sorting trash! i carried on after some large over-sighting on my part and yeh the fic keeps me entertained.

 

Yea, just get him some editor with the nerves of steel, and this may turn out into a great fic.

 

The story is entertaining as hell, despite the fact that he'll ocassionally ramble and become sloppy. Still, I look foward to updates.

 

Does it get any better after the first chapter, or does it continue along the same line? I really don't like the dialogue in Chapter 1.


"I can see you hiding there."

"Cool, kid."

"My relatives wanted to give me cement shoes and drop me in the North Sea. Instead they just left me here on the street in the rain, so that I can die of hypothermia. I'm not sure if I should be glad that I get to survive a bit longer, or be sad that my death will be more drawn out. I'm Harry Potter, by the way."


So does it get better later, or bleh?

 

Re: Harry Potter and the Power of Bonds by Kyrissean Angelis

It's gone.

--bornagainpenguin

 

That sucks. Had potential, but it never moved along quite enough.

 

Slythenclaw? That sounds pathetic. Thank Merlin it was taken out. I mean, why can’t they be a bit original? Hell, Raverin would sound better than that. But I'm babbling, so I'll just shut the hell up...

 

It was ravenclaw actually. That was just a cliffy-joke.

 

Gotcha.

Still, the dual house sorting are always ridiculous, if that’s really what happened. I haven’t really seen a story that pulls it off with any amount of success. Then again I'm not a fan of the emphasis placed on the different houses and their attributes in fanfiction, so meh.

 

Its been taken down

 

I know. See my post above.

It's been requested at the HPRecycleBin so we'll see what happens...

--bornagainpenguin

 

I'm sure the storys' great, and all, but, one problem..... it doen't exist!

 

Whoops already been said, sorry!

 

That wasn't very nice..... I'm just an innocent newb.

Jackass.

 

Come on Surry...We can't expect all n00bs to have common sense, and not post in extremely dead threads.
Oh, wait.
Yes we can.
Adios.

 

.......You have some serious issues.

What in Gods name did I do that was some great offence to you?

Wackjobs, going on about 'following the rules'... I've babysat kids more mature....

Question: If this forum is so dead, why are you here?