Title: Harry Potter and the Slightly Unbalanced HouseElf
Author: Zoken
Rating: T/PG-13
Genre: Humor
DLP Category: Humor/Parody
Pairing: none yet,
Status: Work In Progress
Summary: What is the Power the Dark Lord knows not? I believe it's the adoration of a slightly unbalanced House-Elf and one over protective owl
Link:FF.Net

Somethign I have that I thought you all might enjoy.

 

This is... lolish, I think. A bit short, though.

 

The thing was amusing but it was too short for what it offered. I liked it and will give it a 3/5. If it had more detail, even one or two lines in some locations, it could of been a 4/5. It would of been a 2/5 but having Dobby slap and beat down death eaters works for me. It does also have minor English grammar errors though. I may be too nice here but 3/5.

 

Dobby FTW!

3.5/5

 

The story is gone... for what reason... I don't know...

 

It's not gone. FF.net is just screwy today.

 

It's okay. I don't love it, but I don't hate it. I'd give it a solid 3/5. It has potential, but needs work.

 

Why can't people read this one as much as they read my crappy one?

 

Kinda good. Could do with some minor tune ups, and that kinda thing. I've read much, much worse.

3.5/5

 

As far as "for laughs" fics go I approve of any fic where Dobby and/or Hedwig go on a rampage.

Dumbledore Insults: 2.5/5 (nothing too imaginative here)
Rampage!Dobby: 5/5
Rampage!Hedwig: 5/5
Fawkes attacking Order members: 3/5 (it's original...kinda)
Overall: 3.5/5