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Harry Potter and the Slytherin Prince by Slingit - K+

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Gummy Eye Juice, Oct 29, 2007.

  1. Gummy Eye Juice

    Gummy Eye Juice Squib

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Slytherin Prince
    Author: Slingit
    Rating: K+
    Genre: General/Adventure
    DLP Category: General
    Pairing: H/Hr (it's pretty mild)
    Status: Work in Progress (211K words and regular updates)
    Summary: Harry's sixth year starts with a horrible summer at the Dursleys. New friends, new loves, new lessons and new adventures await Harry at Hogwarts this year.
    Link: Link

    It starts with Harry being pretty weak and cannon~like but after spending part of the summer with Snape, Harry getting more intelligent and independent. The Snape and Harry stuff is well done and not all mushy or anything; but it's the later chapters that really shine with Harry becoming more pollitically aware and blackmailing the new minister (Umbridge) via Rita Skeeter. Anyways it's a decent way to blow some time so enjoy.
     
  2. The Mysterious Nobody

    The Mysterious Nobody Auror

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    Ugh, Snape pisses me off, but I'll give it a try, just because of your avatar.

    I love that movie.
     
  3. Lincos

    Lincos Professor DLP Supporter

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    Ugh, Umbridge as minister? Last we seen in OotP she was getting raped by the centaures.

    Maybe I'll read it later when am bored..... abit like now, but.... not.

    Edit: eh? someone else actually uses the 'word' "Ugh"?
     
  4. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Ugh, why, of course not.
     
  5. Eladi

    Eladi Squib

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    This story does not have my approval

    REJECTED

    2.0
     
  6. malaga

    malaga Auror

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    Ugh, the peach colour in that post reminds me unpleasantly of my Gran's foul cooking.

    This story is almost as unpleasant as that.

    Sure, Harry is training up, but mostly in potions or uber-wandless skills that no one else could possibly do. And Voldemort? Voldemort who?

    He shows up once to crucio Snape (or at least I assume it was Voldemort. Harry had no vision, so it could just be some kinky Snumbles lurve) and another mention so Harry can be incredibly worried about his Snapey-poo.

    I attempted to soldier on to try to get to the good bits, but to be frank, I coudn't get past Chapter Eight.

    Dump it is my vote.
     
  7. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Sorry no... I couldn't get past the 4th chapter. The dialog seems forced and almost surreal.

    1.5/5
     
  8. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    This line cracked me up. Toemasochist!Harry ftw.
     
  9. Garret P.I.

    Garret P.I. Backtraced

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    Started reading... fell in HATE with the story.
    1 star for utter craptacularness
     
  10. Dr. Strange Lulz

    Dr. Strange Lulz Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Crap.

    I give this 1 star, because you cannot have half stars...just 3 connected pointy things.
     
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