Title: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Trials
Author: Avitus
Rating: T (PG-13)
Genre: Action/Adventure/Supernatural
Pairing: None
Status: WIP
Summary: Yr.3 AUAfter his second year of school, Harry receives some freedoms he has never been permitted before, and his eyes are opened to the reality around him. New friends and new enemies will create problems for his third year at Hogwarts School.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2364387/1/

My last active story, this is my baby. I think it went downhill after the first chapter (even though there are only 3 lol!), opinions welcome as always

 

Great story, one of the more orriginal ideas I've seen lately.

I was actually waiting for at least 15,20K words before posting the story here. Hope you hurry up and post a proper third chapter soon, this idea is too good to let it go to waste...

 

I'm stuck around 3/4's of the way in the third chapter, trying to get through Harry's meeting with Fudge. Once I get the third chapter out it'll be easier to start pumping chapters out for this one, the original chapter 3 was lost in a HD crash and i haven't been able to re-write it to my own liking -and lets not start with my chapter limits, I try to keep each chapter to a minimum of 15 pages in Word. I need a nap :cry:

 

Bejeesus. This is Excellent. Update soon, Avitus!

Good concept, more than acceptable writing... awesome stuff.

 

love it, update soon, very original so far, is hermoine a shame too? i hope so, i hate that know-it-all bitch..

 

it's a great story and all but about the whole aunt thing from the biggining just irked me. i mean, the dursleys are asss holes that treated harry like scum of the earth. the harry your portraying him looks like he doesn't even care. your putting more detailed into what he's going to learn and not Harry him self. i mean if my relatives treated me batly i'd give them a pay back theyd never forget.

the kid is suppose to feel frustrated and angry and scared with many emotional scars. and harry sounds like a five year old in the first chapter.

 

Love it. Though shouldn't this be in the Heir of Slytherin section?

Oh and that teaser was evil :twisted:

 

I thought this was good. Though I thought that some of those classes that Harry signed up for were only supposed to be available for 5th year and above? If he's only a 3rd year then why is he signing up for them?

 

He would sign up for them now, but he would take them later. Sorta like planning for the future so that he can study before he takes the classes.

 

I love the story you should keep up the good work. Also love the way taht u opened up the new classes so his hogwarts time like in most fics wont be boring as hell.

 

I loved this story also. It was, well, just brilliant! On all counts. I hope it continues.

 

am i the only one with the negative responce.

 

I think u are. I mean I dont get why u hate the Aunt thing, I mean she doesnt act out of character by going soft and crying about how she should have shown before.

She's still rude as hell and says it after Harry knows she's a squib so better get it out of the way then have uncomfortable questions in front of Vernon.

 

Very nice very nice. Looks great so far, though there is some room for expansion in a few parts, such as the memories, and whatnot.

It's been added to my favs list for quick access and your on my alert list now. I'll probably take a look at what else you've written later today.

 

it's just that i am very empathatic towards people. i know it's kinda corny abut, meh.

beside the chanber is filled with gold and jewlary. that's like a freakin pirets treasure cheast but 10 times larger.