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Harry Potter and The Walkers by ENSIGN - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Xanos, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. Xanos

    Xanos Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Title: Harry Potter and The Walkers
    Author:ENSIGN
    Rating: T
    Genre:Action/Adventure/Humor
    Pairing:N/A
    Status:WiP (slow update)
    Summary: After the events occurring in the Department Of Mysteries Harry Potter arrives “Home” at the Dursley’s where he gains something unexpected, something more, new powers, at a price. OOTP spoilers.


    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2028062/1/
     
  2. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    This has some good points, but it's riddled with stupid plot decisions and shoddy new powers. In the end, it succumbs to the burden of the ridiculous backstory the author had tried to create...
     
  3. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Agreed... then there is the fact that its H/G... serious turnoff to me... Hell id take H/HR over this any day.. good story in a vague sense... but over all not that great...
     
  4. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    it was a complete WTF! moment for me im afraid. I just couldn't get into it at all.
     
  5. That_Boy

    That_Boy DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    He's been alive for thousands of years BUT he still goes to potions class...Hmmmmm
     
  6. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    Is this the one where they believe he's lost all his magic? If so, I don't want to read it again.
     
  7. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    I thought this one was completely strange. And why does he even bother going back to hogwarts in the first place? Anyway, It started irritating me after a while so I gave up reading it.
     
  8. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    I hate it.

    Completely rank with WTF moments, and the introduction to his back-story utterly fails to make sense in the first few chapters.

    It seems like all he needs to do is to wave a hand at Voldemort to kill him, but no...he must be domesticated and must go to Hogwarts.

    Good god.
     
  9. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Yup... lots of WTFs... Thought I liked Draco getting kicked in the nuts...
     
  10. Tinder

    Tinder Seventh Year

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    That's one of the best explanations for these kind of stories I've ever seen ^^.
    Stupid stories that are almost redeemed because Harry does some cool things are a category in their own right. I usually end up wasting way too much of my time reading them.
     
  11. fatal

    fatal Backtraced

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    i read a little of this ages ago, just didn't have what I wanted sadly.
     
  12. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Wow...that last post had only three words spelled correctly.
     
  13. DGD

    DGD Headmaster

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    Re: post

    Do you WANT to get banned? I'm pretty sure Mid's about ready to layeth the smacketh. A small amount of grammar is necessary to post here.
     
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